Mind Massage
By TropicalSnowstorm
An Indian Summer night surrounds me
as I walk down the narrow deck on Lake Anne.
It's very quiet tonight with the exception
of some crickets that think it's Spring
and the sound of my feet on the boards.
I grab a bench where I can stare
at the water and drink my over-priced
tea - not because it makes me
a better person, but because I like it.
The tea shop is run by a South American
of high breeding that can explain
the pedigree of every blend.
A tilt of the cup and warm flavours
dance across my tongue and waltz down
my throat as I look out over the ripples.
The lights of the condos that hang over the
banks cast orange and yellow strips in stray
patterns on the surface, which cause it to
sparkle and pulse like a living thing.
Here, all the senses can be massaged
by something that transcends and envelopes
the realms of sight, sound, taste, touch and smell.
This has become my favourite source of solace,
here on a hand crafted bench that overlooks a
man-made lake in a planned community
built over cow pastures and marsh.
An image floats free of Henry Thoreau seeking
aestheticism in a post-modern existentialist
age, where it is a lake, not a flooded field
of dung, merely because we believe that it is.
As I stretch my legs and inhale deeply,
I ponder all the hours of my life that
were sold for such simple pleasures as these,
which are essentially free and almost paid off.
-- Steve McKennon, 11/2001
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Comments on "Mind Massage"
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On Wednesday, July 13, 2016, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
Such sweet musings in solace that are made...A wonderful record of a moment abroad and a mind broadened.
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A former member wrote:
haha, that last line, though... i liked this because it showed such a depth of awareness of what the moment is made of. felt like a mind massage to read, with the beautiful diction, and the slightly darker hints of realism and human perception vs. reality themes lingering under the surface... very calming, all the same, cheers!
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A former member wrote:
I like how simple it was but with how complex the meanings there were. Great write!
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On Sunday, February 9, 2014, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
I absolutely love the direct thought to appreciate our finer things in life. " A tilt of the cup and warm flavours dance across my tongue and waltz down my throat as I look out over the ripples." This definitely set the mood for me. I, especially, love the proper English it flows beautifully, Storm.
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On Wednesday, December 26, 2007, italianbella
(183) wrote:
you have some amazing talent this was a great read:)
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On Sunday, May 16, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
what a mind massage to read this!! and find warmth in the reminded realisation of seeing beauty and heightening the senses in such free moments, free like reading your works(which id happily pay for)
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On Sunday, May 16, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
and bask in the calm thoughts of what you see in the world around you and in a strange way...take us there
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On Sunday, March 21, 2004, Cwn Annwn
(89) wrote:
Its like a slap across the face...an awakening of the senses...Anyways...Wonderful write!
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A former member wrote:
man you rock!
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On Wednesday, March 26, 2003, manywalks
(747) wrote:
Beautiful as usual.
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A former member wrote:
This was wonderful. Awesome description and beautiful imagery. Loved it. C-ya.
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On Monday, March 24, 2003, darkness_descends
(12) wrote:
You have beautifully philosophical mind. It is so refreshing in a time when idle minds are running rampant. Great write and much respect! ~Darkness~
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On Tuesday, March 4, 2003, Jonas
(715) wrote:
cold nights i walk to find sights that sooth the mind... i believe i've been here before
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On Thursday, February 20, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
This poem was painted in my mind with sheer strokes of genious.
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On Thursday, February 13, 2003, apophenia
(39) wrote:
hello, my lovely philosopher .... seems there are few left with appreciations such as yours ... glad to see a fellow wanderer in the finest sense of the word