Comments by apophenia

  • "ah, black comedy, a hand raised to shadow the stark contrast beneath ... keep that cold mask of intelligence as the guillotine rides closer ... tongue in cheek, laying back as the world goes to hell ..."
    Posted by apophenia on "Dyslexic Postmen" by TropicalSnowstorm
  • "transparency is evidently meaningful ... you induct the whole to my parts, articulate this wander/wonder even in my forgetfulness ... thank you"
    Posted by apophenia on "reductionism/schism" by apophenia
  • "are you drowning or just wading, my dear? or do you wish to drown just to feel again? i have been wondering on this: the poetic indulgence, the aesthetic indulgence of the normal to make it a luscious surreal ... "
    Posted by apophenia on "the Dragon Cycle: Recycled Yet Again" by MercyRain
  • "i want to hold your hand in your words and pray to a balanced abstract god that one day you would be given this ... freedom in decay ..."
    Posted by apophenia on "Glade Plug-ins" by TropicalSnowstorm
  • "ah, the transparent world of the here and now which is really then and done, which could be said to be meaninglful in one's mind and blind in another's ... "
    Posted by apophenia on "Glade Plug-ins" by TropicalSnowstorm
  • "although, on another note, i don't always remember your style as so ... truth be known i haven't read you for a little while unfortunately ... have you recently been feeding on the classics? just curious"
    Posted by apophenia on "The Fluid of My Industry" by Godot
  • "dirty with the film of preoccupation, i presume? encrusted nails and sentiments gorged on routine, the medium fits the routine, the dry starkness, the repetition of necessity ... "
    Posted by apophenia on "The Fluid of My Industry" by Godot
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