Ever mine...
By SilentStalker
You said that time...
You're forever mine...
And when
we met
I won't forget
It was just us
And no regrets
But lustful hearts
Hold dark secrets
The more I see
The worse it gets
Through all the times...
Were you
ever mine...?
And all those guys
And all these lies
And now your voice
Which I despise
Can't stand to look
Into your eyes
My very trust
Was compromised
And all this time...
You were never mine...
Such lunacy
To expect me
To forget this
So easily
So now I'm gone
And you are free
To be the slut
You wished to be
Don't waste my time...
You'll never be mine...
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Copyright 2004 Darun Ferguson
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On Monday, March 5, 2018, RetalicD
(27) wrote:
I loved it straight forward to the point Well done
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On Wednesday, January 15, 2014, Commander_Cadaver
(233) wrote:
I can relate to this to the very last word. It sucks...hurts even. Not something people should go through, and that's coming from a psychopath. Great write nonetheless.
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A former member wrote:
This is amazing work :)
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A former member wrote:
I loved how honest it was as well as how relatable.
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On Tuesday, November 21, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
I don't know, I know how this goes and sad thing when I did experiance I wanted the rat bastard back, but then my head got cleared and my heart finally turned to stone, the smartest move of my life ~Gothic
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On Tuesday, November 21, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
*sigh* Gutting my heart out and stomping onto it an hateful emotion that we never want to feel.. Everybody has these questions and when we get the wrong answers the world just sinks, and we have to find some kind of closure
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On Monday, March 21, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
not your usual style, but still awesome and brutal none the less ~But lustful hearts Hold dark secrets~ i love that line ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
I love this.. Awesome lyrics. I personally understand the meaning here.. Unfortunatly.. --beautiful
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On Sunday, November 21, 2004, yslehc
(334) wrote:
ah sadness... different indeed.. but still great
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On Wednesday, February 4, 2004, Moodswing
(63) wrote:
i agree its nice to see a new post...and serious doesnt look so bad on you...you have flow whether its hack-slash or heart wrenching...your just damn good...
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On Wednesday, February 4, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
Hell yeah....sad topic...nothing hurts quite like this...but you took the expression of that to a whole other level....I feel you on this one!!! jaded
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A former member wrote:
Darun! I'm so happy to see a new post. Even though these lyrics hurt. You can feel the pain in them. And amazing flow. I approve ;)
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On Wednesday, February 4, 2004, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...you see...? I write serious, too...! But it's just not the same flair as my hack-slash poems, ya know...?
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A former member wrote:
Oh shush. I think they’re absolutely amazing :)
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On Tuesday, February 3, 2004, yslehc
(334) wrote:
oooh ow... great write