Digging

By SilentStalker

I'm
Digging
Angrily
Into the ground
Waiting for the time
To remove you from my
Memories of hate and pain
Slow and steady, digging, crying
Finally I have your fate at hand
And I come in, dirt still stuck on my shoes
Before you can even blink your eyes
I attack; my knife starts slicing
Gurgling replaces your screams
Watch you fall down choking
Drag you to the hole
Throw you inside
Bury you
It is
Done

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Published on Thursday, November 6, 2003. Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Digging"

On Saturday, February 20, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (192) wrote:

Holy ****. I gasp. I love the way this flowed...right to "Done"
On Thursday, October 1, 2009, Winter Born (169) wrote:

You are very good bro. that piece you think is crap is actually kind of elegant in it's horror and rage...
On Friday, June 16, 2006, elisa (1595) wrote:

all love should be disposed of in this way.....the perfect segue to Punishment.
A former member wrote: I also really enjoyed this poem. You made the readers feel every word that you typed
A former member wrote: yes, I too have dreamed of this, good times, good stuff,thank you
On Saturday, November 29, 2003, Moodswing (63) wrote:

you underestimate yourself..even when you arent trying the power flows from you....
A former member wrote: gasp, i love it. plz write more
On Thursday, November 6, 2003, yslehc (334) wrote:

simple but good:)
A former member wrote: great work
A former member wrote: aha, i like this one soo much, u are born to be dark!
A former member wrote: chimaira fucking rocks my testes right up into my digestive tract.... good inspiration for self justification and mucho vengeance
A former member wrote: fast and over, just like that; both the poem and the job. hey, whatever gets the job done, or, in this case, rolling again. when i get stuck on my words, i try to start with absolutely nothing in my mind, and usually it works
On Thursday, November 6, 2003, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

...I usually blare some Type-O-Negative or some Chimaira and go nuts...that usually works...hell, I was listening to Type-O's World Coming Down album writing this and Vengeance...
A former member wrote: I like the set up of this one. Seems almost like this piece is framed. Nicely done. ~Ryan