Split You
By SilentStalker
You fight
You plead
I tie you to the tree
I pick my axe
up from the ground
And hold it angrily
I swing
You scream
You're begging me to stop
The wood is parting hastily
With every single chop
I laugh
You cry
I swing
my axe again
I want to see you when it falls
Your death will
entertain
It's cut
I pause
You curse me for my
sin
I give the tree a hefty push
And step back with a grin
It sways
It tips
It's falling to the ground
Combined with screams of fear and pain
It makes a wondrous sound
It drops
You break
Your body torn in two
I
watch in wonder as you bleed
Then give my axe to you
One strike
One chop
Your head falls in the dirt
I had
to end your life my way
While I can make it hurt
I'm
bored
I search
You're not the only one
I will not end
this slaughter yet
I'm having too much fun
Comments on "Split You"
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On Tuesday, December 27, 2016, sIo
(898) wrote:
Yep, that's a wrap. I'm officially done reading your work for now. Maybe forever. Axe man.
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On Saturday, June 2, 2012, LostInDarkness
(31) wrote:
a simply wonderful and dark piece, i shall think about it all night. it is amazing
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On Sunday, May 6, 2012, DarkDruidess
(313) wrote:
Left a wicked grin upon my face...thanks for the images that I will take into my dreams....
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(423) wrote:
You give "giving someone the axe" a nice descriptive bend.
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On Monday, November 10, 2003, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
Have you heard GGFH? This really reminds me of their stuff. Which is an excellent thing, by the way...
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On Tuesday, November 4, 2003, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
*wooo*i wanna try!...~~~Grave
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A former member wrote:
oh the blood , the death, and the pure out anger of it all, hah, great work darun, its sick and twisted and its just what i like to see
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On Sunday, November 2, 2003, yslehc
(334) wrote:
i love it!.. that would be an awsome song... i think it could have a chorus, but it doesnt really need one
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A former member wrote:
pardon my being expletive, but this is fuckin' sick (really good). You could easily throw this into a song. wicked and just what my imagination has been missing for a while.
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A former member wrote:
You sick... twisted... bastard. I LOVE IT!!! -C-
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On Sunday, November 2, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
hehehehe i like..*yay* you got your axe back ~Drea~