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'some men...just can't be reached....'
By Malice In Wonderland
Tell me again
How much this matters.
When no matter
what your promises
pretty rainbows
and rays of hope
You'll revert
regress
and it'll be you
in your little cacoon
again
Tell me why
do i keep biting back
my words
Why i keep digging my own grave
Why it kills me
that you'll never change.
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Copyright 2015 Rain In The Willows
Published on Thursday, February 5, 2015.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
title, 'civil war' guns and rosesAwards
Comments on "'some men...just can't be reached....'"
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On Saturday, March 24, 2018, carlosjackal
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wrote:
Oh, the hopelessness of one who can not be saved...So well wrought and some of those little twists in word choices are mesmerising.
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On Friday, May 15, 2015, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
some times the truth shines through, regardless of how much we/they try to hide it
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On Thursday, January 29, 2015, heroineyes
(111) wrote:
Tell me again How much this matters. When no matter the spacing there is brilliant ps
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On Thursday, January 29, 2015, heroineyes
(111) wrote:
When no matter what your promises pretty rainbows and rays of hope ... Why i keep digging my own grave ... Why it kills me that you'll never change. are you actually struggling with him or yourself...seems like you place the blame on both. i thought this was interesting.
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On Monday, January 26, 2015, Allen
(156) wrote:
Some can change others not. I myself am a example i was on a journey to no where good. this was great and sad
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A former member wrote:
You seem to already know that answer. Good display of expression. Nicely written.
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