Posession in Blue

By Malice In Wonderland

bloodied
her nails
scrape trails
in the sand
a testament
to a mind
truly
no longer her own

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Copyright 2013 Malice In Wonderland
Published on Thursday, July 18, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

....i'm not sure... i just watched the new evil dead....
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  • A former member wrote: made me cringe, the thought of sand getting in between her nails and skin, all bloody and raw. this is kinda giving voice to the last bit of humanity left to her as it dies its terrible death, a testament to a testament. really disturbing and in so few words! awesome, babygirl.

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Saturday, July 20, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (334)By person wrote:

    I LOVE Evil Dead... Although the original was much better. This was very well done and had alot of feeling for something so short. xoxo

  • A former member wrote: I can only wish to write emotion in such a short statement the way you have here.

  • A former member wrote: short, sweet and awesome

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