bleeding seraphims

By Malice In Wonderland

drifting
hopeless
on spinning orbs
of inequity
she
exhales
blooming dahlias
from
deadened lips

hapless
of falling star futility

heartless
dripping fates.from
tear tipped fingers

tapping


infinity

across the ever growing
page

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Copyright 2013 Rain In The Willows
Published on Saturday, February 23, 2013.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: NIce! good emotion and overall dark aspects

  • BetaWolfinVA On Sunday, February 24, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (791)By person wrote:

    love this, love the imagry and the structure :) Scholar

  • Ravenblade On Sunday, February 24, 2013, Ravenblade (307)By person wrote:

    that ending draws me in...I have reread this about a dozen times over. I hate the inexplicable feeling that we can't do anything about things we wish to end...well portrayed madame poet...

  • A former member wrote: desperate and wilting. the bloodshed is beautiful, mournful.. the unshedding of wings. you are so elegant.

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