Astral Projection

By Malice In Wonderland

we
strolled across the.constellations
hand in hand
headlong and heedless
we tasted the corners
of impending doom
like ozone in the air before a rainstorm
lacing fingers
we
ran
demonesque
racing death
the whole way.home

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Copyright 2012 Rain In The Willows
Published on Sunday, October 28, 2012.     Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"
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  • megaprime81 On Sunday, March 23, 2014, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Very deep; I love it. 10

  • haunted On Thursday, March 20, 2014, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    congrats on poem of the day kya! its definitely worth a second read. a great poem.

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Thursday, March 20, 2014, Dreaming in Stanzas (293)By person wrote:

    This is simple and gorgeous, you are a goddess of the pen.

  • BetaWolfinVA On Saturday, February 2, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (791)By person wrote:

    you wrote this beautifully Scholar

  • Oliver Twisted On Friday, November 23, 2012, Oliver Twisted (53)By person wrote:

    Love & death, hand in hand. Doom & our homeland, an afterlife with your other half. Sheer brilliance in all it's sheer form.

  • A former member wrote: i enjoyed this alot...however i would've liked to know more about your journey before you beat out death in the race home....but that's just me....none-the-less...great creation...thanks..-s_o

  • A former member wrote: like trying to run up a road slanted and teetering towards an inevitable chaos... quite tragic... a courageous attempt at reaching across time and space, at beating the odds all stacked like walls against you. beauty and strength in catostrophe. I love you.

  • haunted On Monday, October 29, 2012, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    nice rain! i would love to project astraly. ive tried...i find it very difficult to concentrate passed the vibrations i go through. its said its a gateway at that point...like a door. a great topic, it really grabbed my eye. awesome!

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