Astral Projection
By Malice In Wonderland
we
strolled across the.constellations
hand in hand
headlong and heedless
we tasted the corners
of impending doom
like ozone in the air before a rainstorm
lacing fingers
we
ran
demonesque
racing death
the whole way.home
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Copyright 2012 Rain In The Willows
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On Sunday, March 23, 2014, megaprime81
(740) wrote:
Very deep; I love it. 10
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On Thursday, March 20, 2014, haunted
(837) wrote:
congrats on poem of the day kya! its definitely worth a second read. a great poem.
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On Thursday, March 20, 2014, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
This is simple and gorgeous, you are a goddess of the pen.
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On Saturday, February 2, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
you wrote this beautifully
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On Friday, November 23, 2012, Oliver Twisted
(53) wrote:
Love & death, hand in hand. Doom & our homeland, an afterlife with your other half. Sheer brilliance in all it's sheer form.
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A former member wrote:
i enjoyed this alot...however i would've liked to know more about your journey before you beat out death in the race home....but that's just me....none-the-less...great creation...thanks..-s_o
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A former member wrote:
like trying to run up a road slanted and teetering towards an inevitable chaos... quite tragic... a courageous attempt at reaching across time and space, at beating the odds all stacked like walls against you. beauty and strength in catostrophe. I love you.
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On Monday, October 29, 2012, haunted
(837) wrote:
nice rain! i would love to project astraly. ive tried...i find it very difficult to concentrate passed the vibrations i go through. its said its a gateway at that point...like a door. a great topic, it really grabbed my eye. awesome!