Danger: Octopus

By BetaWolfinVA

i cannot take the silence...
i keep teasing at a pulled tooth,
and it still hurts
-
why am i so clingy that it drives wives,
girlfriends, and sexters away
i grab tight to what i can
-
letting you breathe
and be as you are
have as many men as you want
-
as long as you include me
-
if i some times fall apart
its a hazard of the way i live
with my heart on my sleeve, 
-
i had my heart and soul back for a while
i was beginning to enjoy that old pain
but you ripped it out for me again
-
and you never told me what i did wrong
you never told me what i did right
i can only apologize
-
and accept the hazards of being an octopus tied to a stone
and hope that i find another chance to thaw

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Copyright 12 October 2012 HHMCameron
Published on Friday, October 12, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

some of them want to be abused.
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  • A former member wrote: An insightful captivating read.Every part of this poem blends with the other, becoming in whole a small masterpiece.

  • Sketso On Wednesday, February 5, 2014, Sketso (416)By person wrote:

    Egads... like ripping off a bandaid, but knowing there are a thousand more to go. Kudos to sharing thoughts and feelings many wouldn't ever admit to having.

  • GraveFlower On Thursday, October 25, 2012, GraveFlower (240)By person wrote:

    oh, this one hurts.. . beautiful write. so maney different emotions in just one piece. . *and hope that i find another chance to thaw* . im sure you will.

  • BetaWolfinVA On Saturday, November 17, 2012, BetaWolfinVA (791)By person wrote:

    my emotions are always a jumble of late... :::shrug::: i write what i feel Scholar

  • Alanarchy On Friday, October 12, 2012, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    Im laughing very loudly at 5:56 in the morning. Please don't misunderstand. This was very nicely expressed. Im laughing, because it's like looking in the mirror after a rough night. Jeepers. Let's shake this one off together, eh...? Oh wait, we just did. Cheers.

  • BetaWolfinVA On Saturday, November 17, 2012, BetaWolfinVA (791)By person wrote:

    glad to know i am not the only one that has felt like this Scholar

  • Devilish On Friday, October 12, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    WOW! holy shit this is priceless. damn. I don't even know how to comment lol and that is rare. nice to meet you and thank you for your comments. Scholar

  • BetaWolfinVA On Saturday, November 17, 2012, BetaWolfinVA (791)By person wrote:

    glad that you enjoyed it :) Scholar

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