Danger: Octopus
By BetaWolfinVA
i cannot take the silence...
i keep teasing at a pulled tooth,
and it still hurts
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why am i so clingy that it drives wives,
girlfriends, and sexters away
i grab tight to what i can
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letting you breathe
and be as you are
have as many men
as you want
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as long as you include me
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if i some
times fall apart
its a hazard of the way i live
with my heart
on my sleeve,
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i had my heart and soul back for a while
i was beginning to enjoy that old pain
but you ripped it out for
me again
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and you never told me what i did wrong
you never
told me what i did right
i can only apologize
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and accept
the hazards of being an octopus tied to a stone
and hope that i find
another chance to thaw
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Copyright 12 October 2012 HHMCameron
Author's Note:
some of them want to be abused.Awards
Comments on "Danger: Octopus"
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A former member wrote:
An insightful captivating read.Every part of this poem blends with the other, becoming in whole a small masterpiece.
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On Wednesday, February 5, 2014, Sketso
(416) wrote:
Egads... like ripping off a bandaid, but knowing there are a thousand more to go. Kudos to sharing thoughts and feelings many wouldn't ever admit to having.
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On Thursday, October 25, 2012, GraveFlower
(240) wrote:
oh, this one hurts.. . beautiful write. so maney different emotions in just one piece. . *and hope that i find another chance to thaw* . im sure you will.
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On Saturday, November 17, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
my emotions are always a jumble of late... :::shrug::: i write what i feel
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On Friday, October 12, 2012, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Im laughing very loudly at 5:56 in the morning. Please don't misunderstand. This was very nicely expressed. Im laughing, because it's like looking in the mirror after a rough night. Jeepers. Let's shake this one off together, eh...? Oh wait, we just did. Cheers.
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On Saturday, November 17, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
glad to know i am not the only one that has felt like this
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On Friday, October 12, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
WOW! holy shit this is priceless. damn. I don't even know how to comment lol and that is rare. nice to meet you and thank you for your comments.
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On Saturday, November 17, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
glad that you enjoyed it :)