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everything's (not) gonna be alright
By FindAgentX
everything's (not) gonna be alright anymore
there's something terribly wrong on the spaces (the pauses) in between
my breaths
something terribly wrong with how easily i crumbled in your arms
now you don't even bother to call anymore
but it's not like i have the right to expect you to.
because sometimes i expect too much
i thought that maybe i was right to expect something more that these
dark colors
after giving all my light away
but that was 'used to be'
i need to not give so much for my nothing in return
i need to just give up, move on, let go
of this
nothing
that you owe to me.
naively i gave myself to you and wanted your love
in return
do you think that's asking too much?
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Copyright 2004 FindAgentX
Published on Saturday, July 24, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "everything's (not) gonna be alright"
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On Monday, October 1, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
(795)
wrote:
all that we might wish is that one might love and yes be loved in return
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A former member wrote:
So true. We ask for so little and they take so much - The Phenix
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On Wednesday, December 8, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
too much pain for me to bear right now, I've been going through this again recently. . eh, boyfriends :|. . anyways, this was beautifully pieced together. . in its needing/wanting/yearning. . but pushing.
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On Saturday, August 28, 2004, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
The world is a puzzle, and its laws are the means by which it solves itself... all you have to do is stand back and wait... all will be all-right. Love is not always reciprocated, but it is appreciated, regardless of how unclearly so...
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On Saturday, July 24, 2004, FindAgentX
(31) wrote:
awww.. thank you. that's exactly what i was going for. love you too babe.-
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A former member wrote:
thats not asking too much. i love you. =) i felt so despirate reading this. like, it was happening all over again right in front of me and i couldn't do a thing about it. but thats what you were shooting for, right? awesomely done. much love
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