Anti-climatic Hamster Wheel of Doom

By Malice In Wonderland

it's
one if those days
again
it seems
pointless pleasantries
rolling endlessly off stiffened tongues
tasting of leadened lethargy
fatigue riddled hands
that shake of frazzled nerves and hopelessness
another day another dollar
literally
We wonder
idly at times
at the unseeing eyes
watching
us, the rodents in a cage
it's almost as if the laughter
is palpable
if not misunderstood
circles
are redundant
you know

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Copyright 2013 Rain In The Willows
Published on Tuesday, March 19, 2013.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Saturday, June 20, 2015, carlosjackal (3015)By person wrote:

    So short yet so nailed..Great sentiment and worthy POTD.

  • BetaWolfinVA On Tuesday, March 19, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    sounds like we are going through much of the same or similar shit... again :) love ur writings :) Scholar

  • TheProphetUntold On Tuesday, March 19, 2013, TheProphetUntold (167)By person wrote:

    Appropriate title. Man life is such a fucking drag, day in and day out...but hey...there's always beers! CHEERS! +tpu+

  • Ravenblade On Tuesday, March 19, 2013, Ravenblade (313)By person wrote:

    exactly what I go through...the repetitive lives we live....well done madame poet...

  • A former member wrote: -Enter ass kissing comment about how you write so deep and shit. - Love you, Kya!

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