She Holds Most Dearly To Her Side Street Starlit Lamp
By NeroMatches
Scarlet neon on a puddle of day-end rain;
Moon shadow painting portraits on broken signboard lights.
‘Neath this starless sky I find scribbled constellations upon scribbled
constellations
Breaking into universal sighs, the world breathing melancholically into
the sun
Afternoons cold, her breath even colder;
The stars seem to be sketching no other thing but the glitter jazz that
forms only in her eyes.
I wonder how she could simply drift away deeper into the galaxy,
How she could fly with her wings clipped down by the night.
Intangible and impalpable saxophones start playing as she cries and if
she only knew
Then maybe she would have changed her mind.
I saw her the other day mind-absently staring at moving artworks
Her hands clasped by scalpels broken and bottles bruised
Feathers moving like her soul’s shadow as she sways her wings
And flies. She is an angel beyond any doubt.
But she did not want to leave the ground.
So she held dearly to a street lamp and hung on there for hours.
I would have saved her if I had not been working overtime
Writing about useless things such as lost love
And love most dated back in the archives of time.
It was when I had started my painting when she lost her grip and floated
away into the sky.
But she eventually fell down into my arms again.
It must have been in mid-air when she realized that she could not walk
among the clouds.
Not that she did not belong or anything, just that, her tears have been
weighing her down.
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Comments on "She Holds Most Dearly To Her Side Street Starlit Lamp"
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On Monday, September 8, 2014, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
i wish that i could articulate more than "simply Beautiful"
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A former member wrote:
Hey , good writing! You should read my stuff sometime, give me some feedback
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On Friday, April 24, 2009, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
*BANG!* You're in my Top 20 ;)
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On Sunday, December 23, 2007, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Simply wonderful :)
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On Wednesday, January 31, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
Outstanding...you took my breath away.
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On Saturday, October 28, 2006, Mari
(419) wrote:
hey you..i miss u
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A former member wrote:
ah, exactly what I needed at the moment. Thank you.
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On Saturday, April 29, 2006, agentlemenspromise
(42) wrote:
powerful.
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On Saturday, April 22, 2006, monalisamarie
(113) wrote:
This is very artsy, I love the imagry!
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A former member wrote:
I'm glad i got pointed to this, it is truly a breath of fresh air around here. Welcome and may your stay be long and prolific.
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On Monday, April 17, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
This was just lovely.
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On Thursday, April 6, 2006, mozarts cat
(183) wrote:
oh wow .. *speechless* .. this almost made me cry .. this is exquisite . I wish I could write more here, but words fail me .. you are brilliant, beyond words =)
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On Wednesday, April 5, 2006, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Majestically romantic, majestic par excellence, a poem to breath to - to sigh and read in quiet corners with reverence...amazing piece - truly amazing
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On Tuesday, April 4, 2006, wannabe_rebel
(17) wrote:
i love this poem! i'm so grateful that you left me your brilliant comments about that idiot priest, especially because it led me to your poetry, which i'm really enjoying!
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On Saturday, March 11, 2006, Grey Lies
(185) wrote:
tears brim around my eyes...this is so beautifully!! words that fall hard but ever so gently. fav.
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A former member wrote:
Well hell, that took me too long to find. I am going to bookmark your profile and you'd damnwell better upgrade, because I NEVER bookmark trial accounts and it's not that my exception should make such a big impression on you,
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A former member wrote:
but I WANT you so much to stay so I can continue to read things like this. Pure selfishness. Please upgrade. :)
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On Sunday, March 5, 2006, NeroMatches
(49) wrote:
haha. it is done S R Parke. and thank you for taking your time to read my work.
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On Tuesday, February 21, 2006, Army Barbie
(316) wrote:
This is overwhelmingly lovely. And if I had another few words to place here to let you know how beautiful I found it...I would be more than glad to share. Alas, I don't. Bravo
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On Saturday, February 18, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Yes. Dying_Angel highlighted the best part. But there is alot to love, here. Just great. I can't criticize, I've been mesmerized. Nice work.
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A former member wrote:
"The stars seem to be sketching no other thing but the glitter jazz that forms only in her eyes." ..this is enchanting. Tangible and trickling imagery..it was like spilling glitter over the senses with an artist's gentle touch.
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A former member wrote:
I wish it were possible to paint this in my mind's eye..but I'm not the most talented painter, anyways..so I hope you don't mind if I print it out and put it in my pocket to read when I'm need a little spark.. thank you for this.
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A former member wrote:
Please don't leave. Please. I adore you and I've fallen into a deep infatuation with this. ~ Respectfully, June
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On Saturday, February 18, 2006, NeroMatches
(49) wrote:
this started out as an idea for a painting actually and i never got to do it. thank you for taking the time to read this and commenting on it and bookmarking it. i greatly appreciate it.
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A former member wrote:
god..there is so much i'd like to quote in this. it's beauty blew me away, it's certainly not what i expected. this entire poem was perfectly constructed, right to the very last line. i can't tell you how amazing this is.
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A former member wrote:
oh, and welcome to dp. please stay, i like you.
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On Saturday, February 18, 2006, NeroMatches
(49) wrote:
hmm. please check your mail ms. glass doll. if your memory is good, this might interest you. haha.
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A former member wrote:
hah! i knew there was a reason why i liked you so much! *menacing voice* you better stay this time. :)