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Comments by monalisamarie

"'Fireflies are born inside flickering brilliance of pain ' wow. What can I say? This has so many powerful lines. Great title too."
Posted by monalisamarie on "-Show Me .. How-One Girl Is Worth m-o-r-e Than Twenty Boys-" by DeprivedOfReason

"Well now *ponders* this work makes me feel isolated...and a little hungry ;)... nice write"
Posted by monalisamarie on "Recipe" by johntaiyu

""I won't take another bite form your poison apple" Amazing"
Posted by monalisamarie on "The Break Up" by Bluegirl

"I love the imagery and the meaning here, nice work"
Posted by monalisamarie on "Strange how that sounds" by torn_beauty

"It feels lonely and lovely...nice write"
Posted by monalisamarie on "Lizardkiss" by insideout

"You buried me above ground ....sweet line...actually, I just love the whole thing"
Posted by monalisamarie on "I Read Your Lips and Jumped Off Every Cliff" by Fading_Smile

"Simple, yet lovely"
Posted by monalisamarie on "Miracle" by Mr King

"I love the rhythm that doesn't fade into a sing-song idiocy and the broken rhyme...nice work "
Posted by monalisamarie on "The Risk" by up_at_five

"Sad..and lovely"
Posted by monalisamarie on "Jumping Off This Bridge" by mywristshurt

"A very philisophical poem that I must ponder...excellent"
Posted by monalisamarie on "Destination...UNKNOWN" by xserratedsoulx

"Awesome work"
Posted by monalisamarie on "Used to know her" by vaultgrl

"I love the structure of Shakespearian sonnets and you have pulled this one off with elequence and a level of thought that even Willy himself would enjoy."
Posted by monalisamarie on "My try at a sonnet" by hate_doll

"Sad and beautiful...A poem that we can all relate to"
Posted by monalisamarie on "Circles of Protection" by Aurora_Light

"I love the way you repeat the 'half'..It really makes the title tie into the whole thing. Realistic and nicely thought out similies"
Posted by monalisamarie on "Half The Man" by DarkHeart

"The spacing is very effective as far as form, but the poem itself is pure loveliness. "You may have created broken bones. But I’ve comforted the storm that hasn’t been created." That's so vivid"
Posted by monalisamarie on "Break the Clouds, and Shoot the Stars." by K_Love

"This is very artsy, I love the imagry!"
Posted by monalisamarie on "She Holds Most Dearly To Her Side Street Starlit Lamp" by NeroMatches

"The liquid landscape: Oh, what a way you have with words there are so many implications. The ending totally wraps it up"
Posted by monalisamarie on "Mirror Creep" by Equinox Asylum

"I love the contrast in this...lovely.."
Posted by monalisamarie on "Colors of Dread" by vaultgrl

"This is almost funny..but sad simutaniously"
Posted by monalisamarie on "the innocent boy" by thefairytaleheart

"The rhyme really makes this poem..lovely work"
Posted by monalisamarie on "gone away" by thefairytaleheart

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