Sanitarium

By elisa







i started punching
walls again; someone must be
trying to get in





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Copyright 2010 elisa
Published on Thursday, August 26, 2010.     Filed under: "Haiku" and "Poetry"

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  • carlosjackal On Saturday, October 27, 2018, carlosjackal (3011)By person wrote:

    Man, still love this one as much now as I did when I first ever read it. Fabulous Haiku.

  • haunted On Tuesday, November 27, 2012, haunted (851)By person wrote:

    oh god that sounds like such agony. if i heard them coming again i would be punching walls to. theres nothing like the silent screams that come from within. beautiful!

  • A former member wrote: Nice, very well written...I'm a big fan of Haiku, so few words there's so much unto it...love the 17 syllables magic...

  • A former member wrote: Simple elegances I enjoyed your haiku. It sound too me that something is trying to get out

  • Undertaker On Tuesday, May 1, 2012, Undertaker (32)By person wrote:

    HAHA I must say, This is like a mirrored effect. wonderful work.

  • A former member wrote: I LOVE IT!!!!!! I can relate right now. ][ ][

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Friday, February 10, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (303)By person wrote:

    I don't like haikus because they're too short to get a point across. Except this one, which is effing perfect.

  • Ortolan On Wednesday, October 19, 2011, Ortolan (214)By person wrote:

    I get it.

  • A former member wrote: Still the most perfect twelve word poem I've ever seen.

  • carlosjackal On Monday, July 4, 2011, carlosjackal (3011)By person wrote:

    Still so so fucking good.

  • A former member wrote: I don't really care for haiku's but this one takes the cake!

  • Malcholm Dark On Wednesday, February 23, 2011, Malcholm Dark (810)By person wrote:

    the voices in my head.... best 3-liner I've ever read.... bows

  • urbanhumility On Wednesday, February 9, 2011, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    beautiful, well done...............urban

  • A former member wrote: oh give me a break //haiku depth is easier than// fourth grade math class

  • A former member wrote: other than that i dig it, really.

  • DarkDruidess On Monday, January 3, 2011, DarkDruidess (326)By person wrote:

    Nice little jewel... Sanitarium's are more than just horror movie sets...I liked the way this one made my thoughts go down certain corridors....

  • A former member wrote: short but this says so much. kinda like you're punishing yourself for letting people get too close. question is why?

  • elisa On Friday, October 15, 2010, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    why..? haha barely have to scratch the surface to answer that question.

  • A former member wrote: and yet you didn't answer it...

  • elisa On Saturday, October 16, 2010, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    commenting is usually for your interpretation and analysis not Q & A.

  • A former member wrote: i understand... it is a simple but beautiful write none the less.

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, September 26, 2010, carlosjackal (3011)By person wrote:

    Clear as a bell beautiful..A genuine muse-exciter ;)

  • A former member wrote: *knocks on wall*.... hey, um.... someone let me in? People.... don't they just drive ya nuts :) be well, what dreams would dream of...

  • elisa On Tuesday, August 31, 2010, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    enter......

  • A former member wrote: Haiku... or couplet... you've got it all goin on here shweets.... and by the way, what a treat it is to have your words before me

  • A former member wrote: indeed it makes us feel crazy. vulnerability is ..................

  • SilentStalker On Thursday, August 26, 2010, SilentStalker (1067)By person wrote:

    ...I like the many different ways I'm reading into this...oh yeah, we're gonna have to talk about it sometime... Scholar

  • ubiquitoussoul On Thursday, August 26, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (346)By person wrote:

    I use to take rage out on inanimate objects..but..this is nothing like that..this is a psycho read..seeps into your brain and haunts you..I like that echo comment below-so echo~deadmanshand\ that clawing at something thats not clear in front of you but know is there.ah..just the thought of it,.

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