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Sanitarium
By elisa
i started punching
walls again;
someone must be
trying to get in
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Copyright 2010 elisa
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On Saturday, October 27, 2018, carlosjackal
(2788)
wrote:
Man, still love this one as much now as I did when I first ever read it. Fabulous Haiku.
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On Tuesday, November 27, 2012, haunted
(837) wrote:
oh god that sounds like such agony. if i heard them coming again i would be punching walls to. theres nothing like the silent screams that come from within. beautiful!
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A former member wrote:
Nice, very well written...I'm a big fan of Haiku, so few words there's so much unto it...love the 17 syllables magic...
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A former member wrote:
Simple elegances I enjoyed your haiku. It sound too me that something is trying to get out
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On Tuesday, May 1, 2012, Undertaker
(32) wrote:
HAHA I must say, This is like a mirrored effect. wonderful work.
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A former member wrote:
I LOVE IT!!!!!! I can relate right now. ][ ][
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On Friday, February 10, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
I don't like haikus because they're too short to get a point across. Except this one, which is effing perfect.
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On Wednesday, October 19, 2011, Ortolan
(214) wrote:
I get it.
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A former member wrote:
Still the most perfect twelve word poem I've ever seen.
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On Monday, July 4, 2011, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Still so so fucking good.
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A former member wrote:
I don't really care for haiku's but this one takes the cake!
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On Wednesday, February 23, 2011, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
the voices in my head.... best 3-liner I've ever read.... bows
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On Wednesday, February 9, 2011, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
beautiful, well done...............urban
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A former member wrote:
oh give me a break //haiku depth is easier than// fourth grade math class
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A former member wrote:
other than that i dig it, really.
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On Monday, January 3, 2011, DarkDruidess
(313) wrote:
Nice little jewel... Sanitarium's are more than just horror movie sets...I liked the way this one made my thoughts go down certain corridors....
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A former member wrote:
short but this says so much. kinda like you're punishing yourself for letting people get too close. question is why?
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On Friday, October 15, 2010, elisa
(1595) wrote:
why..? haha barely have to scratch the surface to answer that question.
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A former member wrote:
and yet you didn't answer it...
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On Saturday, October 16, 2010, elisa
(1595) wrote:
commenting is usually for your interpretation and analysis not Q & A.
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A former member wrote:
i understand... it is a simple but beautiful write none the less.
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On Sunday, September 26, 2010, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Clear as a bell beautiful..A genuine muse-exciter ;)
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A former member wrote:
*knocks on wall*.... hey, um.... someone let me in? People.... don't they just drive ya nuts :) be well, what dreams would dream of...
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On Tuesday, August 31, 2010, elisa
(1595) wrote:
enter......
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A former member wrote:
Haiku... or couplet... you've got it all goin on here shweets.... and by the way, what a treat it is to have your words before me
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A former member wrote:
indeed it makes us feel crazy. vulnerability is ..................
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On Thursday, August 26, 2010, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...I like the many different ways I'm reading into this...oh yeah, we're gonna have to talk about it sometime...
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On Thursday, August 26, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(343) wrote:
I use to take rage out on inanimate objects..but..this is nothing like that..this is a psycho read..seeps into your brain and haunts you..I like that echo comment below-so echo~deadmanshand\ that clawing at something thats not clear in front of you but know is there.ah..just the thought of it,.
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