Comments by Undertaker

"This is extremely deep, But death is nothing to fear as it is only the start to what is to come next. Great write! you have alot of skill"
Posted by Undertaker on "Life is a Strife and Death is my Pleasure" by poe_lover28

"We are all victims of that quick escape... that was freaken epic. Wow. You have an amazing tallent. "
Posted by Undertaker on "ADDICTED" by poe_lover28

"the reality of the revealing of lives true color.. Indeed a good read, cant wait to read more. GJ sir"
Posted by Undertaker on "A Dream Come True" by brokensme

"Ahh I feel ya bro. good rhyme"
Posted by Undertaker on "cradle and crush" by FindAgentX

"such beautiful imagery, the way the sunflowers dance, I like the use of brighter Dei, I reminds me of a kind chi. I goes from happy to deep when the smile fades... Ahh you are so tallented."
Posted by Undertaker on "Sunflower Rd" by Dei

"When i wrote it i had a sort of apocolipitc feeling to it, and like a man that acts all tough, and yet when he finds a defenseless girl, and has a shot at being a father almost. haha, there is always a chance for a new start :) thankyou sym"
Posted by Undertaker on "Destruction's hope" by Undertaker

"I am sorry to hear that Velvet... Death is something that is very hard to accept at times.. I also had a friend die last week in a motorcycle crash. Life is much more fragile then most know... This is why we must live life to our fullest. You have my deepest condolences. I hope time will heal the gap that you may have shared with this friend."
Posted by Undertaker on "You are Called" by Undertaker

"I do enjoy a poet that likes to write in a older sort of language. Words most have seem to forgot. A heart that yearns, decided by the elders. This seems to be a very old tradition of how one's love was chose. Her heart meant to be taken by yours. A beautiful poem indeed, I enjoy your deep images. Together forever you shall live. Great write my friend."
Posted by Undertaker on "Eternally" by Deviated09

"I must say Cor, You write with a true eloquence. You truthfully access the deep parts of your mind and master it with a true beauty, Indeed, this kind of work is worth a bow which I gladly give. Cheers"
Posted by Undertaker on "ballet & lotus weeds" by Corinthian

"I do not know how the end plays, but it seems as if a horn with deep silence should blow... When someone is on the meer bed of death, flashbacks do occur as I myself have almost died falling off a cliff "accidently". I really saw everything in a flash and it happened so fast."
Posted by Undertaker on "The Plagued Soul" by Undertaker

"That dirty old reaper taking the hearts of so many. Many worlds are crashed is the twinkling of a eye. Tears do fill the eyes. Ahh you have such imagary, You have had some deep thoughts here, I appeciate you sharing them. Your poem was wonderfully wrote, and I hope that the tears that fill your eyes and the world that is off balance will eventually sit on the axis straight. cheers"
Posted by Undertaker on "CURSED" by Slingnasty

"Ahhh a poem wrote on modern day science. Love the expressions as if a computer main frame was talking itself. Add the computer voice while reading and you get a even better picture. A machine cannot compute it would seem. The cyborg cannot seem to understand. As it accesses information at your every command. A machine constantly drumming, ahhh the use of words mixed perfectly together.Your images and use of words were very good. Thankyou for the poem."
Posted by Undertaker on "" Overfuture "" by bpathos

"Oh my a true love I must say, such passion you write with scarlet. Your images your thoughts, wow. "forever to be yours" such passionate words, Ayi this poem makes my heart warm. Thankyou for it."
Posted by Undertaker on "Bluebeautiful Ocean Eyes" by scarletara

"haha I love it! light the path to home. of course. Fire is something i have a deep passion for. great poem my friend."
Posted by Undertaker on "Consume" by Virgils Vigil

"lightning, cooks you from the inside out :0. Good pic ;) really hard to capture"
Posted by Undertaker on "rain-wrapped" by elisa

"no destroying homes! faith with a system broke. oh how i love your words. ugh you are awsome. beautiful poem! I wait for more :)"
Posted by Undertaker on "doom" by ColorMeToxic

"Oh such a beautiful romance. Wonderfully put. You are truely a tallented writer!"
Posted by Undertaker on "Bluebeautiful Ocean Eyes" by scarletara

"I gotta say, By you repeating the lines, It almosted added a deep twist of insanity, such deep words spoken my deer.I love how you invovled seasons and time in a sort of way. At least how i interrupted it, we are all in our season, some in spring, summer, fall, and finally winter, Time is crazy and we do insane things. wonderful wonderful poem!"
Posted by Undertaker on "Mother, Earth (Paradelle)" by ColorMeToxic

"never give up, no matter who is shouting! keep that hope, strive and push. Good write my friend"
Posted by Undertaker on "short & bittersweet XVII" by RhymeBound

"dude deep my friend. Fill those voids, aweful voids....good poem"
Posted by Undertaker on "A Void" by Clydes_Bonnie

"I can never seem to get it straight sometimes. HAHA Like so many mistakes I find. Thankyou I appreciate it"
Posted by Undertaker on "Evil Legions, Destroyers of Worlds" by Undertaker

"Oh how i like murders pocket! so deep, so dark haha great poem. "
Posted by Undertaker on "The knife in the dark" by violetdarkness

"Oh evil grins, the smiles to hide, Especially under deep dark eyes. I love this writing, I love the visioning for giggling crazy smiles. Awesome poem!"
Posted by Undertaker on "I think I broke you." by Iwas

"HAHA I must say, This is like a mirrored effect. wonderful work."
Posted by Undertaker on "Sanitarium" by elisa

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