If I were God

By Echoes of Orpheus





You would be my goddess
and I wouldn't have to change a thing.

Even as God,
all powerful,
the world under my finger,
I would have nothing
without you.

I could have
any woman in the world
or I could
craft one for myself
but it would never be the same.

God or not,
I am in love.

I would be there,
in your arms,
yours.
I would make sure you never
ever have to cry again.

You would never be cold,
never be lonely,
not feel incomplete.

I would still need,
I would want to feel weak,
bent to your cause.

I would need your arms
to be around me...

In your arms
even the all powerful,
with infinite strength,
would become like a child
clinging to you,
cuddling with you,
only feeling safe
inside your arms

Nothing is wrong,
not with you here holding me.









If I were God

I would be on my knees for you.





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© 2008 Echoes of Orpheus
Published on Sunday, November 16, 2008.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: If i were God, the world would be a poem... Excellent work. Keep on writing! Take care.

  • blue On Friday, February 6, 2009, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    And you say youre not a poet? What a weirdo. This.. this is so.. pure. I echo echo echo such feelings of my own. Purely heartfelt love here. I will silently fave this.. umm since I have no more space. =) ~b

  • Mithiras On Tuesday, November 18, 2008, Mithiras (35)By person wrote:

    Wow Brother. Pure compassion, even the God's I'm sure feel for us, haha. Good poem. Faved- Even though theres no reckless slaughtering in it.

  • Echoes of Orpheus On Tuesday, November 18, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (359)By person wrote:

    haha, I always assumed the first piece you faved would be a bloodbath or something! *is honored* I could throw in a random dude getting cut down out of nowhere :P Joking obviously, thanks brother.

  • Narcissa On Tuesday, November 18, 2008, Narcissa (404)By person wrote:

    That last line...*sighs*

  • A former member wrote: hah. I knew people would like it. It's cute and I like it. :P

  • A former member wrote: it may not be incomplete to you echoes, but to us it makes sense and it is complete

  • A former member wrote: This feels complete in a very complete way, which is... fitting, at least.

  • A former member wrote: ...that should have been incomplete in a very complete way. D'oh.

  • A former member wrote: hmmm... lovely lovely

  • A former member wrote: so very lovely...~Moon (ze fractured)

  • disposable On Sunday, November 16, 2008, disposable (105)By person wrote:

    yes, the last lines sums it up beautifully. 'nuf said. write on...

  • mysterylove On Sunday, November 16, 2008, mysterylove (99)By person wrote:

    beautiful, beautiful. its what its like to be in love. the most dangerous thing ever.

  • Echoes of Orpheus On Sunday, November 16, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (359)By person wrote:

    something about dangerous games that just make it so much sweeter to come out a winner... thanks for the comment and fave, means a lot

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