If I were God
By Echoes of Orpheus
You would be my goddess
and I wouldn't have to change a thing.
Even as God,
all powerful,
the world under my finger,
I would have nothing
without you.
I could have
any woman in the world
or I could
craft one for myself
but it would never be the same.
God or not,
I am in love.
I would be there,
in your arms,
yours.
I would make sure you never
ever have to cry again.
You would never be cold,
never be lonely,
not feel incomplete.
I would still need,
I would want to feel weak,
bent to your cause.
I would need your arms
to be around me...
In your arms
even the all powerful,
with infinite strength,
would become like a child
clinging to you,
cuddling with you,
only feeling safe
inside your arms
Nothing is wrong,
not with you here holding me.
If I were God
I would be on my knees for you.
Comments on "If I were God"
-
A former member wrote:
If i were God, the world would be a poem...
Excellent work. Keep on writing! Take care.
-
On Friday, February 6, 2009, blue
(1409) wrote:
And you say youre not a poet? What a weirdo. This.. this is so.. pure. I echo echo echo such feelings of my own. Purely heartfelt love here. I will silently fave this.. umm since I have no more space. =) ~b
-
On Tuesday, November 18, 2008, Mithiras
(35) wrote:
Wow Brother. Pure compassion, even the God's I'm sure feel for us, haha. Good poem. Faved- Even though theres no reckless slaughtering in it.
-
On Tuesday, November 18, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(357) wrote:
haha, I always assumed the first piece you faved would be a bloodbath or something! *is honored* I could throw in a random dude getting cut down out of nowhere :P Joking obviously, thanks brother.
-
On Tuesday, November 18, 2008, Narcissa
(391) wrote:
That last line...*sighs*
-
A former member wrote:
hah. I knew people would like it. It's cute and I like it. :P
-
A former member wrote:
it may not be incomplete to you echoes, but to us it makes sense and
it is complete
-
A former member wrote:
This feels complete in a very complete way, which is... fitting, at least.
-
A former member wrote:
...that should have been incomplete in a very complete way. D'oh.
-
A former member wrote:
hmmm... lovely lovely
-
A former member wrote:
so very lovely...~Moon (ze fractured)
-
On Sunday, November 16, 2008, disposable
(103) wrote:
yes, the last lines sums it up beautifully. 'nuf said. write on...
-
On Sunday, November 16, 2008, mysterylove
(97) wrote:
beautiful, beautiful. its what its like to be in love. the most dangerous thing ever.
-
On Sunday, November 16, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(357) wrote:
something about dangerous games that just make it so much sweeter to come out a winner... thanks for the comment and fave, means a lot