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Falling Through Space
By BetaWolfinVA
in a downward spiral with food and pills,
some days the world comes crashing in,
and i just try to live
.
i am happiest with my daughter in my arms,
but am lonely most of the time otherwise,
sometimes my wife lets me hold her
.
love is a dance in time
we learn the steps as we go
but some times we stumble
.
and sometimes we grow
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Copyright wednesday 13 aug 2014 HHMCameron
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A former member wrote:
The truth is always the strongest poetry. Let me know if you find that inner happiness. I'm on the search for it as well.
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On Sunday, December 14, 2014, BetaWolfinVA
(795)
wrote:
the woman whos mere memory makes me unfaithful (i havn't seen her in ten years, friendly communication is what keeps me alive) doesn't want children needing my family to go to her mothers wake, and asking them, letting my wife know that there was any communication at all has strained my marriage and being unable to fulfill that obligation has unhinged me and turned off the lifeline i was using. my wife feels that foster/adoption was the only way to keep me over the course of the last two years as i became unhinged
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On Saturday, August 16, 2014, Miztaken4beauty
(177) wrote:
Sometimes survival and finding those little things worth living for make a world of difference. Nicely done.
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On Sunday, December 14, 2014, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
this littlest one that i love the most this littlest one that needs me the most i need to stay here for her.. but it is so hard sometimes to keep trying
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On Wednesday, August 13, 2014, Lylani
(116) wrote:
Sad and sweet and very heartfelt, despite the pain in this piece, your strength and determination shines through. Keep fighting on for those good days. Thank you for sharing.
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On Sunday, December 14, 2014, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
thank you much rylee is why i keep trying
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On Wednesday, August 13, 2014, soul_versing
(883) wrote:
I cannot help but feel your sadness. You express your emotions beautifully. The ending reminds me of that country song, "Life's a Dance" by John Michael Montgomery. Beautiful piece, sir.
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On Sunday, December 14, 2014, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
i think that i may have either just heard it, or had it brought to my mind... the cadence seems similar...
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On Sunday, December 14, 2014, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
interesting... it's actually been years since i heard that one, but that must have been an extremely powerful lyric to stay in my mind that long... i'd actually forgotten the song itself
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