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p.s. i love you
By elisa
before I tell you how i feel...
...i want you to know
i know the reason for every curve in every word
i can site
the hebrew meaning of every backward latin symbol
i know
what flows and why
i can spell it out exactly right
'i love you'
cliché as it may be
it will have to do
(for now)
i know i
and
i know you
let love be
infinite
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Copyright 2005 elisa
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On Saturday, April 27, 2013, Star
(879)
wrote:
beautiful breathtaking words here, elisa. *sigh* (:
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On Wednesday, October 5, 2011, johnbevan17
(52) wrote:
p.s I love you. I love this elisa sometimes I think, people think they say those three words to much. though there's not much else to say when you fall in love and feel that way. awesome write and to the point Thank you for sharing :)
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A former member wrote:
Aw! I loved this! Sometimes, I get frustrated too. I never feel like "I love you" is enough.
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A former member wrote:
p.s...... I miss you.... these meanings you write of... hmmmmm may i taste the infinite within you?
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A former member wrote:
I know your are my friend but we all are alone
in this world of Flows!?
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On Saturday, July 21, 2007, Err0r
(358) wrote:
This is so tender. Your words carry such passion behind them. Very nice.
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On Sunday, March 25, 2007, Enigma
(90) wrote:
Sweet!!! I love this one ...it's great.
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A former member wrote:
I AM ABSOLUTLY AWED BY THE SIMPLICITY AND BEAUTY OF YOUR WRITING STYLE.
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On Thursday, March 1, 2007, elisa
(1595) wrote:
honestly.... thank you... i needed a smile:)
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A former member wrote:
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On Sunday, May 28, 2006, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
..."I know I; and; I know you; let love be infinite"...those are some of the best words I've seen in quite a while...
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On Wednesday, November 2, 2005, suicidalsecrecy
(42) wrote:
simply an amazing piece. very talented writer. ~s.s.
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On Saturday, September 17, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(357) wrote:
bleeaahhh *gags* whroop, whroop, uck... bleeeeahhh! I'm painting the town spewy tonight!
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On Saturday, September 17, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(357) wrote:
ack, ack, ack... gruuuurp... erflllpppfffthh pt pt pthhht... garrrp... ooooogarrrp...
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On Saturday, September 17, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(357) wrote:
hugghhghhg... hughghghhhhhrrraaaaaghhh... whrooooop... bleeahh! Fuck that. Think I'm done. Ptht. Wait on... ack, ack, whrooooopbleah
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On Saturday, September 17, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(357) wrote:
*shudders* ... *whimpers* ... *shiver-sweat-tears*
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On Saturday, September 17, 2005, elisa
(1595) wrote:
did ya have to bust a bulimic nut all over my 'i love you' ......damnit..;)
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On Sunday, March 6, 2005, island warrior
(210) wrote:
Impressive to say the least. Rare beauty.
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A former member wrote:
simply beautiful..
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On Monday, February 28, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
wonderfully heartfelt creation...just absolute pure beaty...a kiss of words so full of love...beautiful.
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On Monday, February 28, 2005, Mr King
(547) wrote:
what more can be said... this is absolutely breath taking... 1, Seth
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On Sunday, February 27, 2005, Im_going_to_cry_now
(24) wrote:
ooh I am impress I bow before your superior writing skills
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On Sunday, February 27, 2005, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
beautiful... simplistic and wonderful.
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On Sunday, February 27, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
this is a lovely write ... but i must say that love sucks..
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On Monday, February 28, 2005, Solace
(1065) wrote:
*sigh*
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On Monday, February 28, 2005, elisa
(1595) wrote:
*le seconde sigh*
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On Sunday, February 27, 2005, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
wonderful....
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On Sunday, February 27, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
hmm...-kitty
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A former member wrote:
This was so sweet and soft.. lovely write.
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A former member wrote:
wow, really beautiful, short n sweet...
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On Sunday, February 27, 2005, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
Awesome.
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