Angel

By SilentStalker

Your eyes are like the shooting stars
That I should wish upon
Your skin so fair that it must share
The radiance of the sun

Your hair like Weeping Willows
By the shallows of the sea
Your lips so fine they fill my mind
With endless fantasy

Your nose so intricately carved
By God's most gracious hand
You resemble Heaven's Angel;
It's hard to understand

If you had wings, you'd fly up there
But I'd see you no more
So I would pray to make you stay
And keep you near for sure

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Published on Thursday, November 6, 2003. Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Angel"

On Monday, February 21, 2011, scarletara (58) wrote:

love it!!!
A former member wrote: this was very good. ~ hdb.
On Sunday, December 23, 2007, Mari (419) wrote:

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On Tuesday, November 21, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560) wrote:

reaction intended, and you always get the greatest response, this was magnificent, and your words still inspire ~Gothic
On Tuesday, November 21, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560) wrote:

.... Reading this right now wasn't such a smart idea.. But it gave me hope somehow it just did. It was beyond beautiful and words.. Made my heart tug and pull. I didn't know it was possible with your works but somehow you always get the
A former member wrote: very constant in rhythm and rhyme...and it works well which is the second beautiful part, aside from the content.
On Friday, April 16, 2004, yslehc (334) wrote:

gotta love those poems that dont let you sleep... good write once again
On Friday, November 7, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1228) wrote:

Who made this.. who did you steal it from... Who are you.. whats happening... Good write tho.. somethings wrong, cant put my finger on it... What you doing with that axe.. *arrrrrghh*
On Friday, November 7, 2003, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

lmao...glad you like the lighter side of the axeman, monkey...
On Saturday, November 8, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1228) wrote:

Yea but dont be like this dude... it's scary like hell..
On Saturday, November 8, 2003, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

...someone convinced me to put these poems on here...and I'm still a little edgy about it, but...not to worry...the darkness is strong in this one...you'll see more craziness...
A former member wrote: So so so so soooo beautiful Darun! I totally agree with Alluring. It's wonderful to read such beautiful words :) *Lilith*
On Saturday, November 8, 2003, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

...thanks...yep, I did have a very open heart when I was younger...
On Thursday, November 6, 2003, Drifter (265) wrote:

damn, nice work. Thinking that i should plagerize the hell out of it and get me some! j/k
On Saturday, November 8, 2003, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

...hehe...as old as this poem is...I could really care...just make sure you remember who wrote it when she's screaming your name, okay...?
A former member wrote: And I still love this one. It's very sweet :) Not many guys will reveal their soft side.
A former member wrote: alluring , soft side? there is a soft side in human being? anyways Stalker, well u can write better i will wait ur new work and i am sure that i will love it.