The Lake

By SilentStalker

Dragged into the cold lake, you struggle with fear
But this is your fate, love; my pain brought you here

The ropes that restrain you will not let you run
Don't worry, my beauty; it's already done

Now this should be painless, though perish you will
Yet you will feel nothing, so please, love, be still

Now pushed underwater, you're fighting to rise
Your panic grows greater; so wide are your eyes

You grasp at my fingers; you're screaming in fright
I can't let you surface; please give up the fight

Your lungs fill with water; you know you will die
I can't stand to watch you; I look to the sky

And soon it is over; your life now is gone
I hold you for hours; can't seem to move on

My love, you betrayed me, for that you did pay
Though I never wanted to end it this way...

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Copyright 2003 Darun Ferguson
Published on Tuesday, October 14, 2003.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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  • Ladyhawke On Monday, July 11, 2011, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    The punishment for betrayal, though silently crying for the hurt to stop. Great write, enjoyed it much.

  • Nameless Pariah On Monday, July 11, 2011, Nameless Pariah (126)By person wrote:

    Somehow this was mesmerizing.

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful. I see such beauty in a man that kills the woman he loves. That is, perhaps, sick but it is also the way I feel. Had I not found my Dark King already, I might have to wonder about you...

  • A former member wrote: Very well written, the rhyme, words, the images. Are all really done too well... Like it's actually happened...haha Awesome story. Brutal and heartwrenching. +tpu+

  • A former member wrote: seems i havn't commented on this one yet. its a great work, it really is, and there was a great deal of feelings coming from it, at least for me

  • TheMistressBucket On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, TheMistressBucket (18)By person wrote:

    This is just so beautiful. Makes me want to fall in love. *Misty eyed*

  • Cinn On Tuesday, October 21, 2003, Cinn (152)By person wrote:

    wow you were definately feelin somethin with this - it really gets you

  • yslehc On Tuesday, October 14, 2003, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    ooo creepy .. i like it, good job

  • hate_doll On Tuesday, October 14, 2003, hate_doll (263)By person wrote:

    hm...I wish this could be the solution to all our backstabbing ex's ::dreams:: whelp, this was great, as always, wolf explained it well, a twisted tragedy...

  • SilentStalker On Tuesday, October 14, 2003, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...and no blood, for a change...hehe... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: He's just good at that...bravo a twisted tragety...wolf Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Yes, he is. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: But there are no floating heads! *pout* How rude! LOL...delicious darling. How is it you make killing people so entertaining and poetic? Scholar

  • SilentStalker On Tuesday, October 14, 2003, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...dunno...I keep reading over this one, and the deepness of it gets greater each time...wierd... Scholar

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