To the Flame
By SilentStalker
I watch you as you fight your binds; I
stare down in dismay
Those ropes will never let you go until they
burn away
You plead with me to set you free; I only light
the fire
There's nothing you can do for me to quench my cold desire
You scream as fire hits your feet; I laugh out in delight
The first few moments are the best; I love to see your fright
You're struggling now to loose the ropes that seal your awful
fate
Don't waste your strength; there is no hope; it's already too
late
The flames quickly rise to your waist; it hurts too
bad to cry
Your face is grave; your eyes are hazed; you want to
quickly die
You bash your head to dull the pain; you're coughing
from the smoke
You try to scream, but all in vain, for all you
do is choke
And finally you're struggling stops; you've given
up on life
You whimper from the constant pain; you want to end the
strife
The ropes suddenly break away; they catch me by surprise
You fall down face first in the flame; red embers pierce your eyes
Your face and hair are caught ablaze; they burn up oh so fast
Your twitching arms cease at your side, as you scream out your last
I watch until the fire dies; my need still not yet tamed
So now I'm off to find the next, and send her to the flame.
Comments on "To the Flame"
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On Tuesday, December 27, 2016, sIo
(898) wrote:
I'm a bit nauseous now.
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On Friday, December 9, 2005, Err0r
(358) wrote:
Pardon my immature comment, but this was bad ass. :D You demon you. Great write.
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On Thursday, February 10, 2005, Chimauron
(87) wrote:
Forgive me, Darun, but I couldn't help but think of all the furniture, bicycles, beer cans/bottle/kegs, and pieces of the gazebo that were sacrificed to the flames of the Camp Eagle BBQ pit, all in the name of drunken debauchery. Man I miss that place...
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On Sunday, September 28, 2003, HeLlSeND
(40) wrote:
burn bitch burn.......::Evil Grin::.....Beautiful the way you twitch, bout time you died you filthy bitch.....hehehe
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On Sunday, September 28, 2003, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...hehehe...
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A former member wrote:
You always have the most interesting writes. I would say they were concerning if I didn't actually know that you were a sweet heart. Great write once again!
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On Friday, September 26, 2003, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
a sick, twisted, demented sweetheart...hehe...thanx.
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On Thursday, September 25, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
oh my excellent work Darun and I agree with Broken the last two stanzas were just stunning. -kRYz
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A former member wrote:
This one is powerful and really hit me as i read it, espectially in the last two stanzas. Very blunt images. Another beautiful work.
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On Thursday, September 25, 2003, yslehc
(334) wrote:
i like this one even more than the last! good job