What Stirs On an October Day

By lupus tenebrae

I.)

Leaves, fallen, skittering
with purpose, flecks of
brittle rust trailing behind them.

II.)

The full spectrum of
autumn, ablaze in the brilliant
glare of high noon.

III.)

Wooly bears; danger-prone,
dogged, scrounging the
compost for a tithe of its earth.

IV.)

A photographer, discerning eyes
locked behind hastened shutters,
moments captured in their gaze.

V.)

The preternatural hush
just before the trees groan
in their shared agony.

VI.)

The chill of feint winter, a dormant
twinge on a zephyrous tongue.
 

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Copyright 2015 lupus tenebrae
Published on Monday, November 2, 2015.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

A piece that came to mind while I was taking photographs on the outskirts of town.
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  • soul_versing On Friday, November 6, 2015, soul_versing (774)By person wrote:

    I am proud to see this awarded PoTD. Congratulations! .tips my hat to thee. Scholar

  • soul_versing On Tuesday, November 3, 2015, soul_versing (774)By person wrote:

    I love the soft spoken narrative voice. The description of the leaves, the beginning of hibernation and the calming before the chilled transition of seasons... absolutely flawless piece. Scholar

  • Nimue44 On Tuesday, November 3, 2015, Nimue44 (289)By person wrote:

    From writing with light to simply writing, but there is nothing simple here. I'm studying photography and I love those images I got from your words... :)

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, November 2, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    I love the imagery and phrasing, but may favorite stanza is "The preternatural hush just before the trees groan in their shared agony.". That was particularly stunning! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • ColorMeToxic On Monday, November 2, 2015, ColorMeToxic (238)By person wrote:

    My favorite season, Fall. Beautifully captured. Scholar

  • rwb35 On Monday, November 2, 2015, rwb35 (64)By person wrote:

    An excellent piece, metaphors for fall and coming winter. Keep it up

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