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a Fight to the Death: Velociraptor Vs. Zippy, the Rabid Gerbil.
By Malice In Wonderland
There was never really any doubt,
was there?
scaled sinew tears through furry flesh
bathing in disease and corroded entrails
the loser
takes on a winners form
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Copyright 2014 Rain In The Willows
Published on Monday, May 19, 2014.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
...this is really stupid....Comments on "a Fight to the Death: Velociraptor Vs. Zippy, the Rabid Gerbil."
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A former member wrote:
Twas an epic battle.
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A former member wrote:
Wow...how very absolutely shocking in the most nonchalant way, ha! You don't even know how esoteric it is, or you'd not say it's shit. "the loser takes on a winners form"...that's deep, man! Moving on to the green groves of freedom in the rabid gerbil heavens...not so bad, not so bad a'tall. So...which one won???? My septims are on Velociraptor!!!!!
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A former member wrote:
Oh..wait...it was gerbil v/s gerbil...wasn't it? HA!
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On Thursday, May 29, 2014, Malice In Wonderland
(976)
wrote:
dinosaur kills gerbil, gets rabies, died. rabies wins ;)
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