walk.

By Star

sometimes

I sit in my room
reading a book
while listening
to classical music.

Placing the main
character with myself
to try and live their life
as they live somebody else's.

sometimes.

I run a mile
just to feel
the breeze
through my hair.

To feel

alive

just for

a moment.







And mostly.

I just put
a smile
on my face
and, move on.

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© 2014 Brandi Lea
Published on Saturday, September 14, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

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  • soul_versing On Tuesday, June 21, 2016, soul_versing (1191)By person wrote:

    Gorgeous piece and very deserving of PoTD! Much love to you and your poetic pen. 💋 Scholar

  • Anarchist On Tuesday, June 21, 2016, Anarchist (14)By person wrote:

    Drawing relations from the simplest of things we do everyday to form a beautiful poem about moving on. Loved it.

  • rwb35 On Sunday, November 8, 2015, rwb35 (82)By person wrote:

    Nicely written, keep smiling

  • andshewasahurricane On Sunday, September 15, 2013, andshewasahurricane (43)By person wrote:

    I like this a lot. I can relate to it in so many ways, it's almost scary. It's so right, all of it. Moving on is hard, but this makes it seem natural and easy, if that's even possible.

  • Electric-Chair On Saturday, September 14, 2013, Electric-Chair (197)By person wrote:

    Love it , I know moving on isn't easy keep writing it will keep forward I hope

  • A former member wrote: this is really good :) I liked it.

  • Lux On Saturday, September 14, 2013, Lux (318)By person wrote:

    I love this too... I think it's a new favorite. The last line was my particular favorite. And running and feeling alive. But the last line... About smiling and moving on. Feels just right.

  • A former member wrote: I really love this. positive posts are a rarity, and I love the upbeat tone of this. It makes me feel like I can do the same and just move on. thank you.

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