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One such Moment in time
By BetaWolfinVA
A work inspired by Moments In Time
I had one such monent in time...
when i met my true love In Real
Life for the first time..
over the top of the car,
for the first time, as i saw her
i saw her chest as she walked out
the door,
her smile as she watched me watching her,
her eyes
as she got closer...
if only i had paid more attentention
to the face around the eyes..
but by then i was fair damned already
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Copyright 28 december 2012 HHMCameron
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A former member wrote:
LoL. If only you'd paid more attention to her face. Classic
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On Monday, February 2, 2015, BetaWolfinVA
(791)
wrote:
Some times simple oversights have life altering consequences. Some of them involve what you knew at specific times. And decades later "I didn't know" is indefensible to yourself, even if no one else cares
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On Friday, December 28, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
Mirrors to the soul...nice - XXOO
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On Friday, January 4, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
yes they are :)
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On Friday, December 28, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...recalling unforgettable moments. the eyes alway get us...
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On Friday, January 4, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
yes they do... the rest passes, but the eyes, they are forever...
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On Friday, December 28, 2012, Electric-Chair
(121) wrote:
Would of, could of should of Love this,
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On Friday, December 28, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
glad u like it
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On Friday, December 28, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Hypnotized by the headlights, it happens to the best of us, something in the genes, cheers!
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On Friday, December 28, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
most men.. (and some women) are mezmerized by the motion of mammaries
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