Whisper to Me ~feat revlis~
By Nehema
I like your voice, sweet like fresh nectar
Emanating with
sentiment, in ink and blood
Making me blush like drinking a fine
dark wine
Onto the page, a pain indeed, issuing from my fingers
A pain I need
A word closer, always a page away
Read what you
have done, a book lies before you
Insanity perhaps,
for relief I pray
Scars are scribbles where you marked
your place
The ink soothes my heart
Sustenance found between the lines
Eyes wide open;
with every breath reality dawns
Only when I open my eyes and find
myself alone
In time
Vision is interpretive, I choose beauty and grace
A blessing, a desire, as I close my eyes
To dream is the
solution, and agony the price
Untouchable perfection, found in flaws,
a flaw before time
Ice cycle piercing
my heart, your beauty makes my heart smile
The freezing
burns cold, like salt in an open wound
A weakness in
her eyes, lapses; a recovery
His strength a promise, unbearable
pauses; an eternity
Freezing....
wishing as if I could change the rules
of the universe with a thought ...more............
longing, sweet
torture, knowing the distance will never cease
...more..........
Lust is a vision, feelings...ratified
More is a need before her eyes, hope a conquest
Nicety is an
essence, and love is beyond
Always needing more - like a dog whose
hunger is never sated
Starving
Love curls like paper charred and
burned around my soul
Femminine sanctified, glory or holy.....beauty
is her curse
She's breaking me, diamonds and hearts.....unbearable
Angels and devils die, make believe; Cupid's cry, tears and
sighs
A thorn on our rose, pain is undenied,
pricks my skin
And I hold it instead of you, when
I open my eyes
Always there though unseen, a whisper
on the wind
Where you are found, like darkness unto the night
Whisper to me....
Author's Note:
Thanks revlis for blessing me with your beautiful words and style, always a pleasure working with youComments on "Whisper to Me ~feat revlis~"
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A former member wrote:
Absolutely beautiful! I love it!
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On Saturday, October 6, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
Thanks for reading and commenting on our work. revlis is an amazing romantic poet. I love that he honors me by writing with me - it's always an amazing experience - XXOO
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On Saturday, October 6, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...there is romance here, reaching across days & miles, seeking unrelieved desire...
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On Friday, October 5, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
One of the best collabs I've read in a long time. Excellent job to you both. Cool as hell. Til next time -
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On Friday, October 5, 2012, Invisible Girl
(134) wrote:
Wow- this is my heart..I felt every word. With pain and with pleasure...thank you both for this.
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On Friday, October 5, 2012, BrokenKatra
(61) wrote:
Amazing :) I love this.
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On Friday, October 5, 2012, Star
(879) wrote:
beautiful without a doubt.. well done (:
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On Friday, October 5, 2012, haunted
(837) wrote:
damn what an awesome write this is! you guys did very well and work great together. doesnt get any better. awesome!
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On Friday, October 5, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
A pain i need .. beautiful. revlis is under rated without a doubt.