Whisper to Me ~feat revlis~

By Nehema



I like your voice, sweet like fresh nectar
Emanating with sentiment, in ink and blood
Making me blush like drinking a fine dark wine
Onto the page, a pain indeed, issuing from my fingers


A pain I need


A word closer, always a page away
Read what you have done, a book lies before you
Insanity perhaps, for relief I pray
Scars are scribbles where you marked your place

The ink soothes my heart
Sustenance found between the lines
Eyes wide open; with every breath reality dawns
Only when I open my eyes and find myself alone


In time


Vision is interpretive, I choose beauty and grace
A blessing, a desire, as I close my eyes
To dream is the solution, and agony the price
Untouchable perfection, found in flaws, a flaw before time

Ice cycle piercing my heart, your beauty makes my heart smile
The freezing burns cold, like salt in an open wound
A weakness in her eyes, lapses; a recovery
His strength a promise, unbearable pauses; an eternity 


Freezing....


wishing as if I could change the rules of the universe with a thought ...more............
longing, sweet torture, knowing the distance will never cease
...more..........

Lust is a vision, feelings...ratified
More is a need before her eyes, hope a conquest
Nicety is an essence, and love is beyond
Always needing more - like a dog whose hunger is never sated


Starving


Love curls like paper charred and burned around my soul
Femminine sanctified, glory or holy.....beauty is her curse
She's breaking me, diamonds and hearts.....unbearable
Angels and devils die, make believe; Cupid's cry, tears and sighs

A thorn on our rose, pain is undenied, pricks my skin
And I hold it instead of you, when I open my eyes
Always there though unseen, a whisper on the wind
Where you are found, like darkness unto the night


Whisper to me....




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Copyright 2012 Robyn Layne
Published on Friday, October 5, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Thanks revlis for blessing me with your beautiful words and style, always a pleasure working with you
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  • A former member wrote: Absolutely beautiful! I love it!

  • Nehema On Saturday, October 6, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    Thanks for reading and commenting on our work. revlis is an amazing romantic poet. I love that he honors me by writing with me - it's always an amazing experience - XXOO Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Saturday, October 6, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...there is romance here, reaching across days & miles, seeking unrelieved desire...

  • Sean Mc Shane On Friday, October 5, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    One of the best collabs I've read in a long time. Excellent job to you both. Cool as hell. Til next time -

  • Invisible Girl On Friday, October 5, 2012, Invisible Girl (134)By person wrote:

    Wow- this is my heart..I felt every word. With pain and with pleasure...thank you both for this.

  • BrokenKatra On Friday, October 5, 2012, BrokenKatra (61)By person wrote:

    Amazing :) I love this.

  • Star On Friday, October 5, 2012, Star (879)By person wrote:

    beautiful without a doubt.. well done (:

  • haunted On Friday, October 5, 2012, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    damn what an awesome write this is! you guys did very well and work great together. doesnt get any better. awesome!

  • Devilish On Friday, October 5, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    A pain i need .. beautiful. revlis is under rated without a doubt. Scholar

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