Surprisingly Unfamiliar
By Nehema
Listening to wave upon wave
Sifting through each syllable
searching
for the slightest hint of recognition
My faded memory conspires
against my will
Who are you?
You're a stranger to
my ears
What deception is this?
My mind screams with
disappointment
Who is this interloper?
This man pretending
to be you?
Why is my memory being deceived?
This
is all so unexpected
Has the last several months been a dream?
Is the man I remember gone?
Can he have evolved so much?
Have you grown into someone else?
Well...I guess...I'm
not the same...
Not the same as when we were...
Younger, more
vibrant and nieve.
No matter what I've become
In your
mind, in your memories
What was I? And now?
And maybe
too, It's my mind that is deceiver?
That created a vision untrue?
You are wholly new to me,
Should I have not expected
that?
How could you possibly be the same?
Am I not
the same?
What were your expectations?
Did I meet them or...
Are you as puzzled as I?
Are you disappointed in me?
The now me? The old me?
What folly is it to not expect
These natural changes
These evolutions?
Our past
selves are memories
Time to let that go? How?
I love who you
were...
At least the memory of who you were
Were you
ever what I remember?
Was he just a young girls musings?
I never really knew,
Back then I didn't take the time
To talk to you, not really
So now in this time
This
man I've come to love
To regard with the highest esteem
Who shares my thoughts,
My troubles,
my demons
This man who makes me want to live,
Explore and thrive,
Whom I cherish and adore...
A stranger? Certainly not!
You are my trusted and faithful friend.
You are still who you were.
(My mind races to find a solution,
For without a resolution,
I will declare a revolution,
against this memories pollution.)
I resolve, you must still be you,
A great gift from God,
My most trusted ally.
Comments on "Surprisingly Unfamiliar"
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful..... just beautiful.
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On Tuesday, June 5, 2012, ANGELSLAYER
(116) wrote:
I have been confused by this many times, but never knew how to put words to the feeling. It seems I've had admirers that had built me up in their minds, but the reality wasn't what they had suspected. lol.
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On Wednesday, June 6, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
haha - yeah I know what you mean! Thanks for reading me, I appreciate your comment - XXOO
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A former member wrote:
i rate this a 10.
2 thumbs up....... totally awesome
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On Thursday, May 31, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
You are my hero, Superman. You honor me, I'm flattered.
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A former member wrote:
Great write! All of your work is beautifully written.
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On Saturday, May 26, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
Thanks 420 - I appreciate the compliment! It comes from the heart, always - XXOO
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A former member wrote:
well done I lost for words! good Write.
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On Thursday, May 17, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
Thanks for reading and commenting, glad you liked it Unique
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On Tuesday, May 15, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
over time, people change & grow w/new knowledge & experience, adding new colors & heightened brilliance. we might be frightened, thinking we're no longer good enough for them...at the end of your poem, your fears seem to be abated...
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On Wednesday, May 16, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
Thanks for the comment, this has been a confusing experience for me for sure!
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On Tuesday, May 15, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
I'm smelling somebody else, but I'm just a crackpot commentator of no officially documented authority. Keep writing and cheers to you!
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On Tuesday, May 15, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
Smart ass!
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On Tuesday, May 15, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Sorry but I know the symptoms, but then my reality is not yours either, as somebody very dear once pointed out to me.
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On Wednesday, May 16, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
Love you & no your no bullshit attitude dwells- BIG KISS!