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The Reckoning
By elisa
it's too late in his reign
for his matured palate
to grow a
conscience
for the taste of
unnecessary death
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Copyright 2011 elisa
Published on Sunday, June 8, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "The Reckoning"
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On Monday, March 8, 2010, Musik2MyEyes
(193)
wrote:
Very VERY deep. It's one I just keep reading over and over...due to the intensity derived from such a small package.
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On Sunday, December 20, 2009, carlosjackal
(3016) wrote:
Fantastic :)
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On Monday, December 8, 2008, Leith Plunkett
(239) wrote:
The more I read this the deeper it becomes. Very effective
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On Thursday, August 21, 2008, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
you hit home and beyond. very nice
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A former member wrote:
It is a shame when those so high and mighty cannot reckon with their own mortality... without necessity. At least, that is what I read. Brief but powerful... so much thought resides behind these careful words... venomous as they may be ;)
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On Monday, July 28, 2008, Winter Born
(169) wrote:
I do agree with Narcissa, You shold poet more often. every time you do, such powerful works emerge from the ether... Though perhaps the time is what makes them so potent...hmm...
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On Tuesday, July 29, 2008, elisa
(1616) wrote:
thank you Winter. i've been reluctant to post ....my writing has been a bit on the dark side. an acquired taste even.
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A former member wrote:
if only he would choke on it...
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On Thursday, June 12, 2008, Narcissa
(404) wrote:
The intensity of this piece is amazing. I wish you would post more.
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A former member wrote:
please don't, such things should be revisited in times of need, for some this happens to be one of those:)
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On Tuesday, June 10, 2008, elisa
(1616) wrote:
felt the same thing when i wrote it. much thx
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On Tuesday, June 10, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Agreed
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On Tuesday, June 10, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
five amazing lines. Thank you kindly
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On Tuesday, June 10, 2008, elisa
(1616) wrote:
...i was just about to delete this.
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On Tuesday, June 10, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Glad I got to see it first :D
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A former member wrote:
I took "unnecessary death" as suicide, so ...no! car accident, cancer, etc are beyond our control, but putting a Luger in your mouth and painting the wall is a choice, perhaps i were off on the interpretation, but that's the thing i love about writing , I take from it what I want, enjoyed muchly:)
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On Monday, June 9, 2008, freudian-slip
(239) wrote:
visions of a smoking jacket and a pistol in hand- worth the wait.
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A former member wrote:
I know EXACTLY what you write here, i'm now here till life decides otherwise..kudos
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On Monday, June 9, 2008, elisa
(1616) wrote:
...aren't we all.. ? :)
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On Sunday, June 8, 2008, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
i wish i had the grace and intellect that you write with...*bows*
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On Monday, June 9, 2008, elisa
(1616) wrote:
*much love*
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On Sunday, June 8, 2008, carlosjackal
(3016) wrote:
Perfect. Reveals that bit more with each read..So good to see a new write from you, elisa :)
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On Monday, June 9, 2008, elisa
(1616) wrote:
immortal:)
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On Monday, June 9, 2008, carlosjackal
(3016) wrote:
"I must confess I'm Guilty I just can't get enough When non-members get pissy That they can't read my stuff. So go ahead and hate me. Break down and have a fit If your dumb ass could log in You wouldn't get this shit!!" Love it! :D
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