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Xenodochial Eyes
By lupus tenebrae
You must be my friend,
my one and only,
as defined,
by xenodochial eyes
I’ve had since the snow
melted,
and the rain became prisms,
you must be my friend,
Because you found me,
and gave me a word in edgewise,
my
one and only, as defined
When we coloured in the lines,
and played the games provided
by xendochial eyes.
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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Author's Note:
Xenodochial was defined by a friend once, as being receptive to strangers. On a side note, I can't write when I'm depressed.Comments on "Xenodochial Eyes"
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On Wednesday, December 27, 2017, Cassette
(1144)
wrote:
I don't think you give yourself enough credit. I like how you used this unusual word.
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A former member wrote:
Is it safe to recall it bedroom eyes?
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On Saturday, October 13, 2012, ColorMeToxic
(240) wrote:
I love it! I knew you'd eventually make use of that word. Excellent job.
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On Saturday, October 13, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Nice villanelle Wolfie and there is lotsa body English that we've forgotten from the old days of caves and clubs, cheers!
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On Saturday, October 13, 2012, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
You're not too far off, it's actually cascade, which is essentially the free-form equivalent to villanelle. It's quickly become a staple of mine. Thanks, Dan.
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A former member wrote:
i am going to be honest with you man..i read it thrice just to get into the eyes to see...what you are trying to show :)
and i liked what saw .. very positive and inspiring.thanks for sharing :D
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