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...lay me down...
By elisa
now i lay me down to sleep
naked breasts
against silk sheets
if i lie here wide awake
surely i will
masturbate
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Published on Friday, September 15, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "...lay me down..."
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On Monday, July 11, 2011, Blinded_Tiger
(518)
wrote:
ohh sweet, you do this so much better then most .. pragmatic and logical in the middle, flirting in the top and buttom, overall erotic and clever
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A former member wrote:
That was funny, and I didn't see it coming.
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A former member wrote:
Rofl, nice... Wasn't expecting that at all.
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On Thursday, May 28, 2009, Nixx
(240) wrote:
lol, theres an image for you...
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On Wednesday, July 2, 2008, demonofthefall
(22) wrote:
lol, short and stimulant (thats what she said)
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On Wednesday, July 2, 2008, elisa
(1616) wrote:
lmao... excellent.
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On Sunday, March 25, 2007, Enigma
(91) wrote:
Great ....No Excelent...I loved it..Nice ending...
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On Friday, March 9, 2007, Serenity
(469) wrote:
wow... the end wasn't what I was expecting but i still liked it :)
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On Friday, February 23, 2007, Sepulcrawl
(78) wrote:
you're creative enough to keep me interested and twisted enough to still entertain. i could totally dig --- a grave for anyone trying to contend with you
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On Friday, March 9, 2007, elisa
(1616) wrote:
*smiles* ...i absolutely love your comment Sepulcrawl.
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On Sunday, November 19, 2006, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
brilliant.
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A former member wrote:
when I read this thinking of your I got so hot I know what I must do...sweet goddess of the south! whew... you are hot!!
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On Monday, October 30, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
Egyptian spun ...soft...lustrous fibers......Mmmm...tends to make the fingers wander deep in thoughts of fantasy.
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On Sunday, October 29, 2006, CorruptedLittleGirl
(253) wrote:
This is my nightly tale. Nice.
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A former member wrote:
Dirty and human, this is great stuff. simple, to the point.. Nice
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On Thursday, October 19, 2006, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
Cracked me yup! loved it.
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A former member wrote:
I'm totally ganna rip this off. But don't tell anyone! ~Ship!
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A former member wrote:
Wupps put this on the wrong post. This probably seems out of place as a comment for this one ;)
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On Thursday, October 12, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
lol....makes sense to me.....:)~
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A former member wrote:
im lovin it
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A former member wrote:
hahaha! I loved it... that's very cute.
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A former member wrote:
yesssss, steamy! so eloquent & feminine.
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A former member wrote:
Gosh... I love it.
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A former member wrote:
Simple and sweet.
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On Monday, September 18, 2006, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
GOOOD
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On Monday, September 18, 2006, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
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On Sunday, September 17, 2006, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
Fun and inviting. :) I like it!
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On Sunday, September 17, 2006, knowhereman
(40) wrote:
Well Dam...
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On Saturday, September 16, 2006, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...whoa; and to think I just got done doing that too... :P
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On Monday, September 18, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
...so you like my 'ode'.... guess who owns it...?
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On Saturday, September 16, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
Hotness as only you can portray it m'dear! Just something about silk on bare skin.... yum! ;)
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On Friday, September 15, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
*gets lovely images* Short but damn~
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On Friday, September 15, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
O.O Woot well erm....wow....~Gothic
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On Friday, September 15, 2006, veingo
(533) wrote:
Mmmmmmmmmmmm ;)-
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On Friday, September 15, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
...finger licking good.... alright...now i've gone to far.
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