poet in poet

By elisa

i......melting with pleasure
he
press press pressured
his intensity
s l o w
in
m o t i o n
deep inside my
tightening grip
-death by friction-
stimulating heat
rapidly increasing pulse
choking the swell of the quill
teasing the absolute
moment of desire
charming the fire
higher

higher


harder
....holding at the tip
until i....i...
i....thrust down with
uncontrollable excitement
bringing sweet release......
of liquor warm want
dripping screaming wet with lust....

poet in poet
pen coming to paper
making poetry


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Copyright 2005 elisa
Published on Friday, May 20, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, July 28, 2021, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes!

  • Devilish On Tuesday, May 8, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Oh god i fucking love you.. oh fuck yeah.. thank you for your fucking mind. Scholar

  • island warrior On Wednesday, May 25, 2005, island warrior (210)By person wrote:

    Very hot write

  • NikesRain On Friday, May 20, 2005, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    oh you do this so well *shivers* .....brilliant, sexy, flowing so well and making the heart skip....outstanding

  • Mr King On Friday, May 20, 2005, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    brilliant sexy... you nail the head with this one... in more ways than one... 1, Seth

  • elisa On Friday, May 20, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    :*)

  • A former member wrote: Very cool. I never can just sit down and write but when the words do come it's like a fuckin tsunami. Great write:) ~Ship!

  • Forgotten Angel On Friday, May 20, 2005, Forgotten Angel (309)By person wrote:

    amazing! i like this way this all flowed together..great write! -Kel

  • A former member wrote: This was really really....good, awesome, uber hot, beautiful, erotic....lovely, amazing etc.

  • sIo On Friday, May 20, 2005, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    THIS WAS FUCKING AMAZING!!!!!!! CRAZY AWESOME!

  • elisa On Friday, May 20, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    tell me about it;) ...lol....thxxx

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