A God For You...
By elisa
I will suffer my own wrath
to save you
I'll be damned
to Hell
for your penance
I will sell my soul
to free you
I will sit in darkness
to behold the beauty
of your light
I will blind my vision
to give you sight
I will fade away
so you can rise again
I will
cry an ocean
so you can swim
I will fill your lungs
with eternal life
in my final breath
and if
the
world turns it's back on you
I will turn the world on it's back
to face you
your name will sing the colours of the
universe
as the stars shine in your honor...
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
...and if you ever think of me
in loving
memory
I will live eternity
in that moment with you.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
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Copyright 2004 elisa2
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On Friday, December 6, 2013, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Now this is love. Stunning.
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On Wednesday, January 30, 2013, FearlessDragon
(137) wrote:
Brilliant imagery, stunning!
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful poem, full of emotions. Nice job.
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A former member wrote:
I do feel much safer when in the arms of this poem. Congrats on this selfless & well-deserved PotD, Elisa :)
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A former member wrote:
Well written!! :)
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On Tuesday, January 22, 2013, Stephanie Sideways
(276) wrote:
Very very beautiful! Gonna have to have it in my fav poems!
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A former member wrote:
I've been moved to tears
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A former member wrote:
Utterly beautiful writing.
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A former member wrote:
wow!
this is awesome
a really deep piece
i love it
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
:D my God has returned... for me ??? I think this shines just as it is... no spit needed ;) I'd bookmark it but .... alas, I'm outta marks :( *big hugs* thanks, shweets.
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A former member wrote:
wow absolutely astonishing... well done
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A former member wrote:
what sacrifice these words place so carefully upon the altar. God is love...............or so I've heard...........
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A former member wrote:
*bows before his God* you will forever be my God, sexy.
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On Thursday, April 5, 2012, The Dybbuk
(895) wrote:
worshipers... one and all ;)
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On Sunday, May 22, 2005, Mr King
(547) wrote:
the power of love
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A former member wrote:
Compassion eclipses everything. -iSo-
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On Saturday, November 27, 2004, ShadowFlight
(105) wrote:
this is a powerful love... the dedication... everything... just...wow
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On Wednesday, October 27, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
you are filled with this incredible outlook on everything....you own my mind body and soul.....i can learn alot from you.....much love,chris
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On Sunday, September 26, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
just so perfect,impacting,i couldnt do this justice with a comment,but i truelly felt it
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A former member wrote:
I wonder if Mother Teresa would have enjoyed this. I know I did. ~Shane~
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A former member wrote:
This is perhaps the most amazing piece of yours which I have ever read, when I consider all the things you've said.
~Shane~
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A former member wrote:
whoever you wrote this for is a very lucky person
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A former member wrote:
so gently I weep, truly
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On Monday, September 13, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
this was simply superb! amazingly written!
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A former member wrote:
It reminds me of my g/f and what I'd do for her. I loved this poem, i read it as though its what a friend should do for another friend.
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On Monday, September 13, 2004, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Damn...that....just damn. That hit me..hard. Your words can move more than mountains, and these words were amazing...just amazing write Elisa.