Comments by The Dybbuk

"Quoth the word fire: Burdened evermore. Scream . I can only hear them scream. Top shelf ponderings chased with stoic tropes of existential macabre. *bows*"
Posted by The Dybbuk on "The Burden of Dreams and Disbelief." by TheProphetUntold

"Through the ritual of summoning, as if recreating that which was caste before Time swallowed the world, we come to know Despair in her full array of grays; she offers no solace, and in cold pastoral, she leads us by your words to rest without peace. Wordsmith beckoning, this here. *fire* "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "The Wood and White." by TheProphetUntold

"I like how the comment box wasn't visible at first. .. ..... sounds like lyric of ole... I can almost here Burns singing this epigraph of sorts. I read it as a duty to hang, where swinging in the breeze is the duty to die.*bows* "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Through the Hyrst of Midwinter Ghosts." by TheProphetUntold

"a fitting end for fire frolickers... scorched is the soul whose life burns out from the inside....immolated, superb image.*bows* "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "He Who Leaps the Flames. " by TheProphetUntold

"This made me chuckle.... I think it'd make far more impression if the digits in the title were transposed. Seriously, a pretty girl like you will find a fertile future, doubtless. Enjoy youth! "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "24" by Intoxicating Delirium

"*your* name.... *reverse*... interesting use of directional figures..... backwards... upwards... as if to iterate with a difference... with differance, as Derrida would write. All the best!"
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Mina" by Phalanx

"Ms. Goddess of the Steppe.. :(........................"
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Corinthian~ÎšÎ¿ÏÎ¹Î½Î¸Î¹Î±ÎºÎ®" by Magdalena

"no scent stains our senses longer than the decay of love, maybe. The one shot at immortality, the one comfort that can contend with complete loss, perhaps... when that dies... all has failed..."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "my druthers" by Jonas

"forgive me if I didn't read the rules... but I liked the personification, especially the claim that it is immortal, the leader of the procession of deadly sins, the mark of the fallen, the exiled. A train untoward... the immortal, in Kierkegaard, if I recall correctly... God... is the very possibility of coming to know the self. But if we move down the timeline to Sartre.... then wouldn't it have to be a fictional train to a conceptual nothingness that resides only in false faith? Maybe...I liked the notion, anyway... made me think for a bit. thanks and good luck!"
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Endless Restoration " by TropicalSnowstorm

"how many lives can we live... how many rebirths can we endure..... and will we still end up empty? thanks."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Birth of Brook" by WinglessFaith

"nice ending.... as I was reading I was thinking rumors.... secrets are an inner demon if kept well.... they fester for long. But secrets spread, well there's the rumor, the gossip, the beast of tongue set among us... that's what breeds paranoia, what kills eventually. maybe. But anyway, I liked the ending, nice irony. welcome to the valley. "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Secrets" by malevolencefixation

"here, here.... slug or shot.... "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Egocentric Distancing" by Clydes_Bonnie

"i would trade a boat load of certainty for a handful of possibility.... paraphrase of Nietzsche... to stone or be stoned... thank you. "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Î¾" by anaksunamun

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