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Dark Knight
By SilentStalker
I walk the path, my sword in hand
I'm out to find the Holy Man
He's done such good it sickens me
But with my strength he shall
not be
I find a town and ask his name
But every time,
I get the same
"He's not here, fiend, now go away"
And every
time, I make them pay
Twenty towns I've destroyed to date
To show them all my immense hate
I wish to see his painful cry
I want to see him slowly die
Our paths are crossing very
soon
The prophets read it in the moon
His God has sent him
on my trail
I worry not; I will not fail
He's heard
my deeds; he wants me dead
The King will pay to have my head
He's gathered forces, large and strong
I lay in wait; it won't
be long
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Copyright 2004 Darun Ferguson
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A former member wrote:
Dark and powerful. Keep it up
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On Wednesday, January 26, 2005, Sepulcrawl
(78)
wrote:
This strikes me as a bit childish. Some of the rhymn scemes are a little obvous and sometime sound contrived. -pxc
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On Wednesday, January 26, 2005, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...glad you picked that off; I'm surprised no one else caught it...this was one of the first times I used this scheme, and my descriptions weren't my best at the time...so I agree; this is nowhere near my favorite work...
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On Thursday, July 1, 2004, Lexicon
(40) wrote:
A Dark Knight always has a Dark Lady, I loved it...
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A former member wrote:
Aahaha This would make a wonderful lyric for a Power Metal band :) It's beautiful, but hey, you already know you are talented :) Glad you posted it back where it belongs...
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On Sunday, April 18, 2004, yslehc
(334) wrote:
o0o0o most definitely evil.. mwahaha awsome
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On Sunday, April 18, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Evil ::grins:: -Morb
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On Sunday, April 18, 2004, MyBrokenMynd
(167) wrote:
ah, fantasy is a beautiful land, as it inspired such a delicouisly evil story as this!! *tears*
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