Hidden Love

By SilentStalker

There's something I must tell you
It comes right from the heart
And you must hear, because I fear
It's tearing me apart

I've loved you since met you
But wouldn't let you know
I won't forget the great regret
Of letting heartbreak grow

It's been so long I've suffered
Felt like eternity
Oh, how I've seen the greatest dreams
How you and I could be

Please hear my cry for mercy
My heart will tell it's true
I still do pray to see the day
That I can be with you

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Copyright 2003 Darun Ferguson
Published on Thursday, November 6, 2003.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • sIo On Wednesday, January 4, 2017, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    I'm convinced the only reason your work shows up on the front page is to suck me in like a moth to light. Then I become so entranced and utterly explode from heartbreak.

  • A former member wrote: I love this....

  • Star On Tuesday, February 25, 2014, Star (920)By person wrote:

    What a beautiful way to tell someone you love them. Sometimes it's hard to confess, that said love. I know how that feels. Great write, darun.

  • A former member wrote: Excellent. Unrequited love. Infatuation. Every one can relate to this. It brings back many wonderful memories.

  • A former member wrote: It was wonderfully tender. Beautiful write.

  • Dei On Wednesday, May 19, 2010, Dei (665)By person wrote:

    ...my heart aches in harmony to your longing. this was so soft. i loved it.

  • Musik2MyEyes On Saturday, February 27, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (193)By person wrote:

    So beautiful...the longing.

  • A former member wrote: I know what you feel .. in a wierd kind of way I've been through the same thing

  • yslehc On Thursday, November 6, 2003, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    i know how you feel to in a way.. great write

  • A former member wrote: as Alluring said!! i know stalker how u feel!

  • A former member wrote: Heh...kinda like my best friend is dating my ex...although he's one of the ex's that I'm still friends with. Great guy...Anywho...I like the commentary at the end...brings insight

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