Y.S.A.

By SilentStalker

I came to ask advice from you
Since you're a trusted friend
These feelings I've been going through
Just seem to have no end

I've fallen for a lovely miss
You know her very well
And when you find out who it is
I plead you not to tell

She has my utmost love and trust
For that, I have no shame
And should my passion be unjust
My heart it is to blame

I know that I must not conceal
Who I'm referring to
So now I feel I must reveal
The one I love is you

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Copyright 2003 Darun Ferguson
Published on Thursday, November 6, 2003.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

-- "Your Secret Admirer"
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  • A former member wrote: What a beautiful and lovely read!.. Love is great when it is honest and deep.. :)

  • megaprime81 On Sunday, May 4, 2014, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Great work! I love it.

  • A former member wrote: ohh Yay! that was cute ! :) thanks for the read .

  • Musik2MyEyes On Saturday, February 27, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (192)By person wrote:

    I seem to have stumbled upon a heart spilling messages sweet to the ears of the recipient. These are lovely works you composed.

  • darth ren On Sunday, November 12, 2006, darth ren (30)By person wrote:

    it seems that this is taken from my life, but it seems things may have gont better if i would have recited this poem.... jk good write!

  • A former member wrote: once again beautifully placed and written.

  • yslehc On Friday, April 16, 2004, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    hehe another cute one.. nice job

  • A former member wrote: Oh nice. I agree with Fawn, great twist at the end there. Awsome job. ~Ryan

  • A former member wrote: aaawwww.... i don't know what to say.... gosh, i love you too..... lol hey this was.....god saying nice to your shizzle sounds odd, but yeah... that was nice

  • A former member wrote: He he he...I loved this one too. I enjoy the twist at the end. I'm really glad you're posting these.

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