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A Crayon, Wax Unbroken
By lupus tenebrae
A crayon; orange wax
unbroken in its brindled
sheath, lonely, vibrant in
the
road-
side
grey.
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Copyright 2016 lupus tenebrae
Published on Wednesday, April 20, 2016.
Filed under: "Structured" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
I found a lone crayon on my walk, today, this snippet came to mind.Comments on "A Crayon, Wax Unbroken"
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A former member wrote:
Before reading the story behind your inspiration, I could already see myself walking along the roadside to come to find an orange crayon on the ground. The writing took me to the place as if I were there and I thought to myself "maybe this was thrown out a car window". Nicely done.
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On Wednesday, April 20, 2016, RoseTheBrokenHearted
(130)
wrote:
All the imagery that came from this short piece was brilliant. It is almost similar to seeing the good, in a dark, cruel world.
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On Wednesday, April 20, 2016, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Great minimalist piece, I love the visual of the orange offset against the grey. Ciao, T/S
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On Wednesday, April 20, 2016, Star
(879) wrote:
i want to color the world with that crayon. i think the sidewalks would look lovely if they were orange.
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