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Daffodils, Gilded with Sunlight
By lupus tenebrae
Daffodils; petals
glisten with dew, snow-white
shards seized by the wind;
flurries gilded with sunlight,
flitting, cut free of their stems.
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Copyright 2016 lupus tenebrae
Published on Wednesday, April 6, 2016.
Filed under: "Structured" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
A tanka I'd written on the inside of an Easter card, pretty much the B-side to "Brushwork in the Bridgeport Eve".Comments on "Daffodils, Gilded with Sunlight"
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On Wednesday, April 6, 2016, Star
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wrote:
i agree with the tattooed goddess. i love daffodils. as i was reading this i could smell them as if i was holding one in my grasp. beautiful.
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On Wednesday, April 6, 2016, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
Beautifully descriptive, I love daffodils with such passion. Great piece. -Write on
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On Wednesday, April 6, 2016, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Was just observing this very scene in my yard. Great piece! Ciao, T/S
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