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War
By lupus tenebrae
WAR
service
sacrifice
soldiers, steadfast on
desert sand, purple hearts
persevering for our sake
"The nightmare, just before sweet dreams."
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Copyright 2015 lupus tenebrae
Author's Note:
A meager offering for Veterans Day, showcasing the style of a clarity pyramid.Comments on "War"
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On Tuesday, August 16, 2016, magpythief
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wrote:
I cannot break from my musical ear. However, the subject is enticing. Also, why desert sand? I hear there are forests in the holy land.
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On Thursday, November 12, 2015, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
The nightmares they face, and all their sacrifices only to ensure our sweet dreams. You've painted a strong visual, a strong visual that speaks a thousand words. Such an honoring piece fit for our veterans. .hugs.
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On Wednesday, November 11, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
I like the style! Is this something you came up with, or an existing form? Ciao, T/S
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On Wednesday, November 11, 2015, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
It's a form I came across while researching minimalist styles, this is only my second attempt at one. It's definitely a huge departure from the haiku and all its variants.
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