Haiku

By BetaWolfinVA

three lines dance un-rhymed
syllables five seven five,
and one thought stated
 

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Copyright Sunday, 17 Jan 1999 HHMCameron
Published on Thursday, July 24, 2014.     Filed under: "Haiku" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

a haiku on haiku... loop the loop, whoo hoo (revised to fix sylables Thursday 24 July 2014)
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  • Mack Kenney On Wednesday, August 17, 2022, Mack Kenney (11)By person wrote:

    Some nice insight into what a haiku can be

  • carlosjackal On Friday, August 8, 2014, carlosjackal (2656)By person wrote:

    Really clever and original. A haiku about a haiku? Loved it :)

  • BlackVelvet Rose On Tuesday, July 22, 2014, BlackVelvet Rose (176)By person wrote:

    never heard of a haiku on haiku... but none the less i like it and was to the point. clever :) Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Very clever writing a haiku about haiku's! Scholar

  • BetaWolfinVA On Tuesday, September 17, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    at the time, i don't even think that i was trying to be clever... :) Scholar

  • Electric-Chair On Monday, September 16, 2013, Electric-Chair (122)By person wrote:

    Very Nice!!

  • BetaWolfinVA On Monday, September 16, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    Glad that you liked it :) shorter- better for me it seems Scholar

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