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Haiku
By BetaWolfinVA
three lines dance un-rhymed
syllables five seven five,
and one thought stated
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Copyright Sunday, 17 Jan 1999 HHMCameron
Author's Note:
a haiku on haiku... loop the loop, whoo hoo (revised to fix sylables Thursday 24 July 2014)Comments on "Haiku"
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On Wednesday, August 17, 2022, Mack Kenney
(11)
wrote:
Some nice insight into what a haiku can be
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On Friday, August 8, 2014, carlosjackal
(2656) wrote:
Really clever and original. A haiku about a haiku? Loved it :)
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On Tuesday, July 22, 2014, BlackVelvet Rose
(176) wrote:
never heard of a haiku on haiku... but none the less i like it and was to the point. clever :)
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A former member wrote:
Very clever writing a haiku about haiku's!
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On Tuesday, September 17, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
at the time, i don't even think that i was trying to be clever... :)
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On Monday, September 16, 2013, Electric-Chair
(122) wrote:
Very Nice!!
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On Monday, September 16, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
Glad that you liked it :) shorter- better for me it seems
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