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Goddess of Ravens
By BetaWolfinVA
You were young
Once and so was i
Unknowing of the truth
Radiant
in our happiness
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Living in the moment those three years
of our distance
Insistent on a future I didn't know you didn't
share
Eagerly anticipating the change
Saving me from being an
evil man
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Making me love you more each day
After discovering
your lies
Damned for what i knew
Enticed by your body and mind
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Marrying you was always my goal
Else why put my freedom
in your hands
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And here we are years later
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Call
me, save me
Help me set my self free
In the darkness of my
mind
Long tortured for the love we shared
During the time
that you were more mature than i
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Maybe you can
Only
see your side
Likely just you getting your way
Easily finding
your prey in me
Serving you with all i did
Terrible in my
hopes and dreams
Ending when you chose one not a coward
Resolute
in abandoning me
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Copyright Thursday, 20 December 2012 HHMCameron
Author's Note:
When first Raven contacted me, she was a 19 year old mechanic, and i was 23. Just before we met in person for the first time, she called me up and said that she had not been honest about her age, she claims to be 16... which is bad enough... lying againComments on "Goddess of Ravens"
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A former member wrote:
Awww, so sad. Well written.
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On Sunday, February 3, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795)
wrote:
thank you :)...
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A former member wrote:
Wow... My sympathies, friend. 'Tis a very heart-felt and heart-breaking... I would say more, but I seem to be at a loss of words...
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On Saturday, February 2, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
i think more and more of her each day
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On Friday, February 1, 2013, haunted
(849) wrote:
oh man that really sucks. i think any time a relationship goes bad and dont work out its hard. ive loved so deeply and when it just doesnt work out its horrible to feel the flood of emotions that go with it. no matter how hard you try to work it out...it just aint happening. i feel for you cameron. reading this made my heart bleed a bit. i think youll never truly appreciate love until youve loved and lost it. but hey, your a good looking guy, theres many like her. you just have to find her. thanks for sharing.
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On Friday, February 1, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
i guess, she has been the dark on my soul for 16 years... and i feel best when she texts me back... even if i never get more from her, its enough to get by... but what cost if i want more?
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On Friday, February 1, 2013, dwells
(4284) wrote:
I once dated a blonde dutch girl mechanic, she was almost too young, but older than me in many ways. I was not the salvation she sought (she was a bit scary) - cheers!
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On Friday, February 1, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
now you know why i remember her with equal parts love and guilt...
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