Velvet Black Corsage

By lupus tenebrae

 



The arm of velvet black corsage
and turtle waxes in the sky,
is like the lace of red mirage

That hits you with a lead massage
of rhubarb wire in the eye,
the arm of velvet black corsage.

The rubber bomb of banned barrage,
is falling from the stars on high,
is like the lace of red mirage.

Saving face, this blunt visage,
is holding tongues of passersby,
the arm of velvet black corsage.

The gosling down of grey garage,
a safety net of alley ties,
is like the lace of red mirage.

Thinkers take the low passage
and leave their slice of humble pie.
The arm of velvet black corsage
is like the lace of red mirage. 

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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Published on Monday, November 5, 2012.     Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

*Repost* one of my more...underrated villanelle.
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  • eidos On Tuesday, November 6, 2012, eidos (40)By person wrote:

    I love the way you use metaphor. This piece was very well done.

  • Devilish On Monday, November 5, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    How could anything you write be underrated.. you are a brilliant star. Scholar

  • dwells On Monday, November 5, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    I was grooving on turtle wax jobs in the sky - do they still sell that stuff? It was a bitch to buff if you weren't in dark shade. Enjoyed this as usual Wolfie, cheers!

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