Comments by eidos

"I'm not sure if I should laugh at this comment or be sad, because this is what I've noticed around this place."
Posted by eidos on "fabricated." by eidos

"this had undertones that I will need to analyze as I read it more. I'm intrigued."
Posted by eidos on "No solution" by Deathkitten

"i hope you revisit this when you find your muse. it's astounding so far."
Posted by eidos on "Untitled [She VS. He]" by jodeanna

"I relate all too well. Too well to read this again. Wonderfully written."
Posted by eidos on "4000 milligrams" by freudian-slip

"I love short poems. This one was a slow build up, it felt like a storm approaching knowing that it'll kill you. Then the ending, pow. I'm reeling. Great write."
Posted by eidos on "Undeclared" by freudian-slip

"This is my first I read of yours. I'm completely impressed, and I can't wait to have more time to read back through your collection."
Posted by eidos on "Solitary" by Beautiful Incidental

"I love the way you use metaphor. This piece was very well done."
Posted by eidos on "Velvet Black Corsage" by lupus tenebrae

"coincidence. the username references plato. thank you for your comment."
Posted by eidos on "the unbreaking of self." by eidos

"the anguish of being nothing more than what others make you. This burns through the thickest of skin."
Posted by eidos on "the girl. as a piece of paper." by Dreaming in Stanzas

"like watching water with bare hands."
Posted by eidos on "Sex with a Twin" by Maladroit

"for some reason, those 'just for today' moments hurt more than the rest. You see the ending, but you can't stop it. This hurt. Wonderful."
Posted by eidos on "Boxed Beginnings" by Maladroit

"I reread the first stanza a few times. I couldn't get into it. I almost gave up. I forced myself to continue, and I'm glad I did. All together, this makes up something beautifully simple."
Posted by eidos on "A Series of Blue" by lupus tenebrae

"it's like completing the edges of a puzzle, when you find that one that makes you feel this way. The rest, it just falls together from there."
Posted by eidos on "The Little Things, Honey." by jodeanna

"hah, understandable. I strive for optimism, but typically get caught up on the little things that make the big picture look so bleak. One day, one day."
Posted by eidos on "subjective in nature." by eidos

"I believe pride plays a part simply because it's at that moment that one has the choice to either fight back, and show weakness, and a need for another person, or let them go and show the strength go on alone. Pride is a fickle thing, one that I will never fully understand. And yes, the subjectivity is more directed at her here, and the way that the same thing can make people feel so different at different times in life. I often wonder what would happen if the human mind decided to stop making life and love confusing for us. Would we be happier, or would the complacency be worse than the heartache that we have now?"
Posted by eidos on "subjective in nature." by eidos

"This had an enchanting feel to it. Very beat like, with a touch of something deeper, if possible. I enjoyed it."
Posted by eidos on ")0(" by Feral

"There is something so longing in this. Wanting so badly to help, to be helped. This hurt to read."
Posted by eidos on "Puceau" by Maladroit

"I'm not a fan of rhyming the same word over again for the entire stanza. It really takes away from the reading of the piece. Interesting concept though."
Posted by eidos on "The ants go marching" by cadymae

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