Shattered ... Hope?

By BetaWolfinVA

You are really not
what i needed now but you
are definitely
-
what dearly i want
some one to love me and to
make me feel alive
-
each piece happiness
bought with another piece of
my so mortgaged soul
-
waxing lyrical
as i fall deeper into
the betrayers abyss
-
but dearly i would
love to hold you in my arms
look into your eyes
-
i cling too tightly
until i am pushed away
way too many times
-
i reach-out again
in hopes that i bring back my
hand intact, un-torn

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Published on Tuesday, October 2, 2012. Filed under: "Haiku" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Written for someone as i was falling

Comments on "Shattered ... Hope?"

On Wednesday, July 16, 2014, Lux (280) wrote:

Being torn from love like a wet leaf after a storm. This piece made me sigh with wist, even though there's so much love and praise here. I just find it so ... so .. I haven't the words.
A former member wrote: Relatable poem. Very nice, I like it
On Friday, January 31, 2014, BetaWolfinVA (791) wrote:

Thanks you much :)
A former member wrote: such emotion, great write! :D
On Wednesday, October 24, 2012, BetaWolfinVA (791) wrote:

thank you much. I am unsure if she read it, before she introduced me to the world.
On Tuesday, October 2, 2012, haunted (837) wrote:

what a great emotional peice and i want to say never bite the hand that feeds you in your last stanza! nice write!
On Wednesday, October 24, 2012, BetaWolfinVA (791) wrote:

shall we say I pulled back a bloody stump... evidently I deserved a "sweet girl" that wouldn't "use me". irony that considering my history.
On Tuesday, October 2, 2012, RubyXero (481) wrote:

the chances we take... hopefully they are worth the nawing.
On Wednesday, October 24, 2012, BetaWolfinVA (791) wrote:

I enjoyed even the break up... it's afterward that gives pain