Love Letter

By Rebel tiGer King

I have submurged myself
Chemic Vat of romance
Yours
Complexity breeching
Filling my lungs
Deep scar tissue
I have read the verse
That slips your tongue
Undressing your mind
Savage shades of poetry

I have heard the pain
Seen the beauty of you
Naked
Glistening
Full moon, shed your metaphors
I breathe this sin
The air laced around your fingertips
Drank from the lips that speak the elegance
I live beneath the hallways
of your mind.

I am, a not so secret admirer.

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Copyright 2012 Rebel tiGer King
Published on Friday, September 14, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • sadistic intent hex On Wednesday, September 11, 2019, sadistic intent hex (245)By person wrote:

    beautifully written and hot as hell nice and congrats on the POTD

  • Sin On Monday, October 8, 2012, Sin (1179)By person wrote:

    this was exquisite...the second stanza especially. left me with a smile and a sigh ~k

  • Maladroit On Saturday, September 15, 2012, Maladroit (301)By person wrote:

    Lovely. I say, you make admiration welcomed.

  • FadedBlues On Saturday, September 15, 2012, FadedBlues (2961)By person wrote:

    ...genuine, sensual, artful...

  • Vulture On Friday, September 14, 2012, Vulture (63)By person wrote:

    and you call me the brilliant one, pfft. if only I could sew together words half this lovely.

  • A former member wrote: lucky lady. this is absolutely radiant. missed the silk of your tongue, tiger. it's magic. i'm so glad to see you posting something that isn't heartbreaking.

  • Rebel tiGer King On Friday, September 14, 2012, Rebel tiGer King (274)By person wrote:

    thank you much miss - RTK

  • Devilish On Friday, September 14, 2012, Devilish (3782)By person wrote:

    Wow. Truly .. Who ever she is I hope she just got off as sweet and sick as I just did. =).. Damn it.. I read this like swallowing my favorite drink as if i was dying of thirst. beautiful tiger. Scholar

  • Rebel tiGer King On Friday, September 14, 2012, Rebel tiGer King (274)By person wrote:

    :) gracias -RTK


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