Perfect ecstasy

By Rebel tiGer King

Walking the line with my head beneath the sand.
I see her image through grayscale .
Flickering tongues through velvet tears.

Speaking volumes through her hips,
Tilting the journey of the blue ecstasy .
When mermaids make love to the moon

She kisses the wind
And sways milky way eternity.

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© 2008 Rebell tiGer King
Published on Monday, May 19, 2008.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Taunting The Reaper On Saturday, January 30, 2010, Taunting The Reaper (178)By person wrote:

    Lush and dreamy and quite beautiful.

  • Riven Waker On Saturday, January 2, 2010, Riven Waker (323)By person wrote:

    a terribly sublime piece - quite perfectly executed

  • A former member wrote: Pure art man, just...pure

  • A former member wrote: That was 'of another time and place'....I think someones in for ~treats~ tonight.. Pure splendor man.

  • insanemonroe On Monday, May 19, 2008, insanemonroe (16)By person wrote:

    ahh the writing of a man in love,,,tis beautiful really beautiful **) -monroe*

  • A former member wrote: soft and tender imagery here..of the night, the girl, the fascination.. beautiful poem, beautiful baby..:)

  • Narcissa On Monday, May 19, 2008, Narcissa (404)By person wrote:

    *sighs* beautiful...

  • A former member wrote: *shivers at the perfection*

  • Sparrow On Monday, May 19, 2008, Sparrow (89)By person wrote:

    Oh my...

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