Perfect ecstasy

By Rebel tiGer King

Walking the line with my head beneath the sand.
I see her image through grayscale .
Flickering tongues through velvet tears.

Speaking volumes through her hips,
Tilting the journey of the blue ecstasy .
When mermaids make love to the moon

She kisses the wind
And sways milky way eternity.

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Published on Monday, May 19, 2008. Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Perfect ecstasy"

On Saturday, January 30, 2010, Taunting The Reaper (169) wrote:

Lush and dreamy and quite beautiful.
On Saturday, January 2, 2010, Riven Waker (317) wrote:

a terribly sublime piece - quite perfectly executed
A former member wrote: Pure art man, just...pure
A former member wrote: That was 'of another time and place'....I think someones in for ~treats~ tonight.. Pure splendor man.
On Monday, May 19, 2008, insanemonroe (15) wrote:

ahh the writing of a man in love,,,tis beautiful really beautiful **) -monroe*
A former member wrote: soft and tender imagery here..of the night, the girl, the fascination.. beautiful poem, beautiful baby..:)
On Monday, May 19, 2008, Narcissa (391) wrote:

*sighs* beautiful...
A former member wrote: *shivers at the perfection*
On Monday, May 19, 2008, Sparrow (88) wrote:

Oh my...