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Too Many (To Follow)
By A_Puppet_Show
Sails upon silent water,
I watch you play below;
But if I raised my head,
my ocean is dead, and -
all my stars are named!
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© 2007 Blinded_Tiger
Published on Monday, May 14, 2007.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Too Many (To Follow)"
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On Thursday, May 17, 2007, Solace
(1065)
wrote:
Freakishly fantastic, this is an awesome epitaph to be seriously considered - its one of those rare times I can hear and see and feel the words - I cannot say enough for this, its your best when you do this...
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On Thursday, May 17, 2007, Solace
(1065) wrote:
I think I might be looking down into the water and missing all the stars...fathomless depths...
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On Monday, March 17, 2008, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Still my favourite of yours, outside of the obvious Nadir bounds. Theres something about it that eats at me, that just sticks and won't let go. Miss you man, wish i had of been rich enough to see you in Europe.
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On Saturday, June 28, 2008, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Tell me the next time you are near Denmark. I would just drink up my cash anyway, or spend it on going to koncerts ;)
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On Tuesday, May 15, 2007, nur hidayah
(114) wrote:
There's too many (to follow) in such a concise piece. Delight delight delight then "my ocean is dead, and- all my stars are named" Depressing!
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On Tuesday, May 15, 2007, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
short, sweet, well done
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On Monday, May 14, 2007, Mari
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