Gutter Lily
By Narcissa
On the corner
Stood a man with a sign
"Why lie? I need a beer"
At the street light
Stood a woman with a
sign
"I need a miracle"
An emaciated scar
She
was lavender thriving in winter
Her raven locks struggled against
a net of dew
Like famished birds trying to flee a corpse
A
shepherd hook grin
Never reached eyes of anticipating coffins
A gutter lily
Picking away scabs like festering petals
With meth for lunch
And heroine a hobby
Strapped to the
tracks
With no train coming
She discarded her cardboard elegy
The woman crossed the street
and joined
the man
On the corner
Empty Handed.
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Published on Sunday, May 11, 2008.
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On Saturday, April 11, 2020, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Stunning observational poetry capable of bringing the most stubborn ego back to earth. Great stuff.
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On Tuesday, December 12, 2017, Cassette
(1087) wrote:
mmm. poignant.
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On Wednesday, November 8, 2017, worm
(1149) wrote:
poignantly descriptive!
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On Thursday, August 6, 2009, ALBATROSS
(194) wrote:
"And heroine a hobby Strapped to the tracks With no train coming" Very very clever. Impeccable descriptions with multiple meanings. I always love this kind of subject matter as well. I feel like there is always something unseen we can learn from the pariah of society. Interesting that she ends up 'empty handed' because a miracle is too much to ask. And empty handed symbolic of alone - with the other man but not holding his hand not truly "WITH" those around her. I am so thoroughly impressed. The intricacy is admirable. You write some mighty powerful stuff!
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On Friday, May 23, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(357) wrote:
Wow... This was amazing.
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On Monday, May 12, 2008, Sketso
(416) wrote:
I used to work on one of Tulsa's major streets, right where the highway crossed over, and I watched this story every day. Beer is an easier get than miracles.
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A former member wrote:
It's nice to see the invisible people get
a mention, unfortunately for the reasons just why they go un-noticed, well depicted.
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On Sunday, May 11, 2008, Rebel tiGer King
(239) wrote:
What a site, one i have seen before not too long ago, all i could do is watch as the life crossed a path of another empty face, excellent write -symph-
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On Sunday, May 11, 2008, melodies revisited
(30) wrote:
It's beautiful. It really does depict the horrors of, well, all the bad things we see....
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On Sunday, May 11, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
thank you