Southbound Lanes and Guitar Strings
By Sin
As of late Ive been trailing behind your guitar strings darling
Plucking your left over notes out of the air like smiles
And as of late Ive been traveling every southbound road I see
Hoping that it leads its way back to you
But my veins make a terrible map
Of criss crossing emotions to my heart
Where youve wrapped your misty mountain voice around tight
and I cant seem to shake those sweet silken chords
(Not that I would want to even if I could)
But all the hazy stares you send in my direction
Are lost on blue skies instead of my eyes
And its a hard place to be stuck between heartache and envy
If I was that guitar that you strum so skillfully
With fingers hovering and teasing harmony and vibrations
I would sing you a melody that matched your soul
And melted into the magnolia breezes
We would make beautiful music together
With your rough fingertips and my hollow bones
But as of late ive been trailing behind your guitar strings darling
Chasing those little left over notes and hiding them in my pocket
Waiting for southbound smiles to cover the miles
And take me home to you
Baby, I want to come home to you
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Comments on "Southbound Lanes and Guitar Strings"
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On Thursday, May 15, 2008, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Come back :(
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On Wednesday, October 10, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Beautiful piece! I love the lines, "If I was that guitar that you strum so skillfully With fingers hovering and teasing harmony and vibrations I would sing you a melody that matched your soul...". Ciao, T/S
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On Wednesday, October 10, 2007, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
I don't know how I missed this. Absolutely priceless. Great flow, great words, and of course your great ability to express great emotion. Never understated and never melodramatic. You are, I must believe, perfect. Lovely. --Jes
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On Sunday, July 15, 2007, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
I still have this tacked up on my wall. I read it at least once a day, it reminds me that I'm loved by someone more beautiful then even these words. And, I love you too.
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On Saturday, May 19, 2007, Doc
(143) wrote:
I knew my southbound musical charm would get to you sometime
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On Friday, December 28, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
pst where the heck are you sonny?
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On Sunday, May 20, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
oh yes i could only fight it for so long ;)
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On Wednesday, May 16, 2007, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
such love !! and expressed so delicately and beautifully - well written work :)
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On Saturday, May 12, 2007, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
"But all the hazy stars you send in my direction Are lost on blue skies instead of my eyes" *Heart breaks like an old worn string* You are so very beautiful, kristykat. ;)
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On Saturday, May 12, 2007, jack paper
(121) wrote:
take me home... country roads.. this here's a country song! *grabs boots and ten gallon hat* yee haw! i like this a lot kristy
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On Saturday, May 12, 2007, Mistress Shadow
(249) wrote:
Beautiful, has that certain flare to it that makes it stand out among other poems. Bravo! ~T
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On Friday, May 11, 2007, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
:) Perfecto! The sentiment and yearning in this were expressed magnificently. Loved it! -Carl
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On Monday, May 21, 2007, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Still love it!! -Carl
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On Friday, May 11, 2007, Army Barbie
(316) wrote:
This was so beautiful, Kristy...so beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
Music is the best emotion
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A former member wrote:
I loved this. The ending was so sincere. (I hope I spelled that right) Well done!